Thanks for reading! Yeah, the Tegan and Sarah fic is quite dark. I looked into how the Doctor used Martha in the same way we use anyone when we need comfort, and just drag it out a little more.
You mentioned typos too :s, thanks for seeing them - I did a hasty edit because I wanted it up quickly. Could you highlight them for me?
Dark - that was the word I wanted and couldn't find (lack of breakfast - my blood sugar level and therefore concentration level are both low !)
I'll go through them later and drop you an LJ Private Message with the list of typos - I need to grab the aforementioned breakfast before I head out into the unexpected rain ! :D
Hee! *glomps you* Aww, you have no idea how lovely it is to hear that from you! It was hard writing on the spot but I liked what I came out with in the end because I hadn't done that 'tumbling in' sort of writing for a while. I'll wait till you're online and squee at you later. xxxxxxxx
Even in the shadows, it would only take a second to recognize him, but his blue eyes would remain startled, his gorgeous mouth wide open, as the Doctor swooped upon him and took Jack’s hold on responsibility and reality, bit by bit.
That was lovely. Very nice drabbles! We have another amazing author amongst our ranks! YAY!
These are really good! As you know, it's all about Ten/Master as far as I'm concerned, but I think you got the right sort of tone for the Ten/Jack ones down really well. ;)
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The Ten/Martha, (Tegan and Sarah - Want Back in Your Head) one was a bit freaky...
You've got a few typos in there, but they'd easily be polished out...
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You mentioned typos too :s, thanks for seeing them - I did a hasty edit because I wanted it up quickly. Could you highlight them for me?
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I'll go through them later and drop you an LJ Private Message with the list of typos - I need to grab the aforementioned breakfast before I head out into the unexpected rain ! :D
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Aww, you have no idea how lovely it is to hear that from you! It was hard writing on the spot but I liked what I came out with in the end because I hadn't done that 'tumbling in' sort of writing for a while. I'll wait till you're online and squee at you later.
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Even in the shadows, it would only take a second to recognize him, but his blue eyes would remain startled, his gorgeous mouth wide open, as the Doctor swooped upon him and took Jack’s hold on responsibility and reality, bit by bit.
That was lovely. Very nice drabbles! We have another amazing author amongst our ranks! YAY!
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