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genclay June 27 2008, 08:55:47 UTC
Awwwwww, that last line was great. The whole thing was great but i'm a crap reviewer so thats all I can say.

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clioidae June 27 2008, 21:32:44 UTC
Between you and me, I love my last-liners :)

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teh_pariah June 27 2008, 14:29:09 UTC
Oh, fuck off, woman, it's fantastic as usual. Take pride in the fact that I drop everything I'm doing at work just to read this chapter, SLOWLY, as it should be read. Don't make me reach through the intarweb to smack some sense into you. [/rant]

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clioidae June 27 2008, 21:33:54 UTC
*grin* Are you back from London, then?

And thank you... maybe I'm worried that it's all the same. *shrug*

Don't worry, I keep meaning to write back to your e-mails!

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teh_pariah June 28 2008, 09:46:30 UTC
I'm not quite back from London yet, but my flight leaves in a few hours. ;) I was in London FOR work. No way in hell I could afford to come here on holiday, HAHAHAHAHA.

At the latest, I'll be back in intarweb contact by Monday. (But you has my cell number! At least, you should, since I have yours...)

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teh_pariah June 28 2008, 10:01:09 UTC
I felt the need to leave a bit more of a review other than YOU'RE FAB, to state exactly why I feel this chapter's fab, other than the fact that it's written by you. ;D

I don't think I've read in any other fanfic this concept of Lois being Apollo to Superman's Achilles--and while on the surface it does seem to be a monumental betrayal, I can't help but think that it falls in the same vein of Everything happens for a reason. Life demands a balance; all things must be kept in check, and all that stuff. Kryptonite is vile, vile shit, but it IS Superman's physical foil. I can't really explain properly how I feel that...while Lois was wrong to shout it from the rooftops (and her greater betrayal was simply taking advantage of his confidence in her, I think), it's kind of something that HAD to be put out there somehow, eventually. As he said. If not her, someone else was gonna spill the beans. I can understand both her guilt and his forgiveness (beside the fact that his very nature tends toward forgiveness far more than the average ( ... )

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