Wild Adapter Story with NSFW Title (2/3)

Apr 02, 2011 22:26



Fandom:  Wild Adapter
Title:  The One with the NSFW title under the cut
Author:  Sunspot
Rating: NC-17
Note:  In 3 parts for length.  Part 1  Part 3

The One With . . . (2/3) )

slash, wild adapter

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evilchuckles April 3 2011, 03:34:44 UTC
Oh, God, this is marvellous... Tokitoh is SO well done and Kubota's longing is palpable. I love the bits where he's trying to reassure himself. And, yes, he absolutely deserves a medal.

And plus, gah...so, so intensely erotic. *dies*

p.s. what's ketty-corner?

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sunspot67 April 3 2011, 03:50:44 UTC
Thank you! I really love these characters and I really wanted the story to be about them, told through the medium of sex, rather than a PWP.

Ketty-corner is US vernacular for diagonally. Kitty-corner is the more common spelling, ketty-corner is a variant, and less well known, but kitty-corner made a terrible pun, so ketty-corner it is (also ketty-corner is the variant I grew up with).

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evilchuckles April 3 2011, 04:24:03 UTC
I don't think you would ever write a PWP, in the sense that the tag is sometimes used, even if you tried (not that I'm down on PWP, they're not easy to write and sometimes they are the best characterised fics if only because the author has zero time to establish them before the sex!) But you always write such deep, sophisticated work with a unique cadence that catches me every time.

Thanks for explaining ketty corner. I thought it might mean diagonal!

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sunspot67 April 3 2011, 04:38:10 UTC
Aw, thanks. Characterization is key to an enjoyable PWP, for me, and I imagine it would be very hard to capture it well in such a short form (now am intrigued to try).

I'm wondering now if I should change the "ketty-corner" to "diagonally" to make it clearer. I've used "ketty-corner" before in GWYM, but there it was an appropriate Midwestern regionalism. I'll have to look it over in the morning,as it's after midnight here and I have no business being awake (and need to take Athena to Hebrew School in the morning!).

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kirathaune April 5 2011, 04:22:22 UTC
OMG, you've totally nailed Tokitoh's contrariness! Poor Kubota, he's got the patience (and self-control) of a saint!

*onward to Part 3*

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sunspot67 April 6 2011, 22:44:59 UTC
Thank you! I do so love their dynamic!

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