Comments | sunspot67: Saiyuki short-short story: Cant dels Ocells

sunspot67

Saiyuki short-short story: Cant dels Ocells

Dec 25, 2010 12:09

Fandom: Saiyuki
Author: Sunspot
Title: Cant dels Ocells
Rating: PG 13
Note: A Christmas gift for Lawless, who wanted Sanzo and Goku and birdsong. El cant dells ocells is a Catalán Christmas carol. The title means “Carol of the Birds.” Advent Challenge day 25

( Cant dels Ocells )

slash, saiyuki, advent challenge 2010, sanzo/goku

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laurose8 December 25 2010, 17:32:23 UTC

Lovely!

A good one for the finish.

Congratulations, both for doing it and doing it so well.

sunspot67 December 25 2010, 17:55:19 UTC

Thank you very much--although I did miss (and still owe) last night's. I was wiped out after we took the kids on a long walk and went to bed right after dinner. Darn chest cold.

laurose8 December 25 2010, 23:32:36 UTC

If there's any debt, it's on my side.

Really, that's yet *another* brilliant idea!

I'm sorry about your cold. Take care of yourself.

sunspot67 December 26 2010, 16:54:08 UTC

Thanks, will endeavor to.

lawless523 December 25 2010, 17:58:54 UTC

Awww. Thank you for this seasonal and sweet story.

sunspot67 December 26 2010, 16:41:00 UTC

You are very welcome--I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thank you again for the plug on your lj.

lawless523 December 26 2010, 17:44:52 UTC

You're welcome.

kirathaune December 25 2010, 17:59:06 UTC

*beams* Just beautiful!

Love Sanzo's thought processes through the whole thing.

sunspot67 December 26 2010, 16:42:17 UTC

Aw, thank you! It's tricky to write Sanzo being all cuddly and tender (for Sanzo values of cuddly and tender) so I'm glad it worked for you.

suanz December 26 2010, 07:40:36 UTC

...Sanzo was well fucked...

*blushes*

Thanks for sharing such a lovely ficlet. ^^

sunspot67 December 26 2010, 16:50:43 UTC

Thank you!

And, er, this made you blush? Not part 7 of the Chanukah fic? (Just teasing. Actually, anything racy makes me blush. Rather embarrassing.)

In general I tend not to get too hung up on who does what, and often write pairings in which fucking itself is not happening (anal sex not being something that most folks jump right into, after all) but for some reason I really see Sanzo and Goku as, once they have an ongoing sexual relationship and are used to each other, including a fair amount of fucking and defaulting to Sanzo bottoming. I think he needs a place to let go and not be in charge (not that that is necessarily the dynamic for anal intercourse, but I think it's how it would often be for these two). And I've probably gone on more than you'd like on the topic. Whoops.

suanz December 27 2010, 01:53:33 UTC

The reason for the blush is because from those 4 magical words alone, I conjured lots of images/positions complete with surround sound audio. Sometimes I shock myself. LOL!!!

I think a lot of Saiyuki writers share your sentiment that Sanzo would prefer to give up control during sex and let Goku/Gojyo/Hakkai (depending who writes the story, lol) lead for once.

sunspot67 December 27 2010, 17:00:04 UTC

My goodness, that is a lot to unpack from four words (*fans self*). Hm, I have more seen the opposite dynamic in pairings of Sanzo and Goku, to the point where I was starting to feel like it was kind of a cliche for Goku to bottom. Then again, I also tend to think there is far more anal sex in fanfic than is realistic, especially in first time or new-to-having-a-male-partner stories. Just my opinion, of course.

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