Stay II (/No Love, No Glory story arc)

[sunsets_dinos]

“I’m not sure you understand, Mr Ryan,” the elderly woman smiles tightly, placing her cup of tea carefully back on the table. “This is not your decision to make.”

“I know, Mrs West, but it should be your granddaughter’s.”

“Samantha is just a child. She doesn’t know what’s best for her.”

“Who could know better?”

Sam can see through the ajar

Comments

[lukadreaming]

Yay for Ryan seeing off the horrible Gran! And very sharp dialogue between them.

[sunsets_dinos]

Thank you, I did rewrite their dialogue a couple of times until I was happy with it. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[bella_farfalla]

Hooray for Ryan! :D

[sunsets_dinos]

He's awesome, isn't he? :):) Sam certainly thinks so.

[talliw]

Fantastic written. The power struggle between Ryan and the grandmother from hell was great.
And the last line made me weep.

[sunsets_dinos]

Thank you! :) I'm so glad you like it. I must admit that last line makes me want to cuddle Ryan. :)

[fredbassett]

Excellent! Tense, snappy dialogue and a lovely ending :)

[sunsets_dinos]

Thank you!! :):) I was a bit nervous about this part, I really wanted to get the dialogues right... (but now comes the fun part, little snippets of her first meetings with each of the guys!! ee!)

[tia198]

“I can promise you,” Ryan smiles, holding the old woman’s piercing gaze without a flinch. “I won’t let Sam turn into a gay man.”

LOL -This line is classic!