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greeneyespurple May 26 2009, 21:06:34 UTC
I think you did great :) Some very beautiful lines, like:

She could pretend not to feel growing pride with every heated moan but that’s a lie she would never believe herself.

and
...keeping her in a steady, lulling state of bliss.

I really liked how every woman is different, also (and most importantly in this) in a sexual sense. Not just three barbie girls getting it off.

Bravo!

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sunsets_dinos May 26 2009, 21:10:52 UTC
Squeeeee! I'm so glad you think so. I couldn't take it if I turned these great women into clichés. I feel comfortable enough with Helen but I haven't written much for the other two so it definitely was a challenge. And who thought I could still blush while writing? :-P

Thank you for reading my dear. :):) Love your icon! :9

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