Food, Glorious Food

May 25, 2010 23:01

Nick was like a starter, vetting the appetite for more, always teasing Helen into real hunger with stubbly kisses but failing to truly satisfy her needs without even noticing.

Stephen was the main course, everyone’s heartthrob, catering to her needs with easy smiles and the salt for adventure. Just right for her but she couldn’t see.

Becker ( Read more... )

helen/stephen, helen/nick, 2010 fiction, helen cutter, becker/helen

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bella_farfalla May 25 2010, 21:05:58 UTC
Nice analogy, very clever.

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deinonychus_1 May 25 2010, 21:17:00 UTC
ooh, very Helen, and interesting use of the prompt.

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canadian_jay May 25 2010, 21:27:24 UTC
Oooh. Lookit you, all clever and stuff.

Very nice.

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lukadreaming May 25 2010, 21:27:58 UTC
Very HELEN! And a neat use of the prompt . . .

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rodlox May 26 2010, 05:16:48 UTC
not sure how Becker was in any better position than Stephen (judging-wise, that is; all other positions...HELEN!HELEN!HELLEN!)

excellent drabble.

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