Comments | sunsetdawn20: Exanimate

sunsetdawn20

Exanimate

Mar 27, 2009 12:59

Title: Weight
Characters: Lyle(OC), Lester, Cutter, Helen
Pairings: Lyle/Lester, references to Stephen/Sam(OC)/Ryan
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Exanimate
Summary: My first time writing what never happened. *sobs* Definitely NOT compatible with my Dysfunctional series.

Weight

Lyle was the one to shoot Helen Cutter in the leg as she tried running away ( Read more... )

primeval, nick cutter, helen cutter, jon lyle, james lester, weight

Comments 20

lukadreaming March 27 2009, 12:19:56 UTC

Eeek! Yibbles! *Sticks fingers in ears and goes lalalalalalalalala*

Really powerful drabble!

sunsetdawn20 March 27 2009, 12:30:28 UTC

Thank you. I know how you feel, I felt so incredibly bad writing that, it hurt. See, I knew why I never killed Stephen before. My poor heart can't take it.

reggietate March 27 2009, 12:29:04 UTC

Youch! Powerful! *runs from the scary drabble*

breathing heavily yet still not getting enough air.

That's spot on, too.

sunsetdawn20 March 27 2009, 12:31:36 UTC

Thank you. It was really hard writing this. Too painful for everybody involved.

verito295 March 27 2009, 12:45:26 UTC

Awwwwww *huggles everyone*
Very touching and painful in such a short amount of words. Great job!

sunsetdawn20 March 27 2009, 17:49:26 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you think so. Your icon is absolutely gorgeous, btw. :)

lilyroseharper March 27 2009, 13:04:55 UTC

*sniffle* Good drabble

sunsetdawn20 March 27 2009, 17:49:59 UTC

Thank you. :)

slashybits March 27 2009, 13:48:36 UTC

*sniffles*

I feel sorry for Lyle for being first on scene and having to break the news but I'm high fiving him for shooting Helen.

Very dramatic, a real punch to the gut.

sunsetdawn20 March 27 2009, 17:54:17 UTC

I'm usually defending Helen, I try to understand her and I think in many ways I do but this is a point where she goes simply too far. So I definitely agree, yay for shooting Helen. lol

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.