Parallel Lines

[sunsetdawn20]

Title: Parallel Lines
Pairing: James/Will/Jack(in every possible combination);Will/Mary(OC)~or Will/Liz (if you swing that way)
Rating: hard NC-17
Words: 6,758

Summary: "Between you and Jack." It couldn't have been more obvious. You wanted him. And, as usual, I couldn't deny your wish.

Disclaimer: I don't own PotC or the characters used. And Mary is justin_barrette '

Comments

[sunsetdawn20]

Thank you, I'm glad I could convey the emotions, then. :)

[kseenaa]

Now that was amazingly well written!

[sunsetdawn20]

I'm glad you think so. I have written this long long months ago, but I just couldn't find the strength in me to type it into Word. It's good to know that I had it in me even back then. lol

Nice icon, btw, even though I'm not a fan of either pairing, it's still funny. :)

[haldir_fancier]

Intense. Very sad and angry. Thanks for sharing.

[sunsetdawn20]

Thank you for reading. :)

[kittymay]

Nicely written, very nice!

[sunsetdawn20]

It makes me so happy you read this, thank you so much. Means a lot to me. :)

[kittymay]

Not at all. It was a pleasure to read it, and your writing seems to keep on getting better. It's also extremely fluent; which is unusual as I understand English isn't even your first language **is jealous**!

[sunsetdawn20]

*blushes* I'm trying. :) I love writing in English, actually I feel like I couldn't write in any other language. Somehow the English constructions feel closer to what I want to express. So if you ever happen to want to point out any mistakes, no matter how small, feel free to do so, I'm eager to improve.

[lulabel]

This is a great story, very moody and intense. You've drawn a very interesting take on Will, one which is much more complex than what we've seen in the movies. I like how you've presented all the dynamics of the various relationships, and how each of them is guided both by love and by selfishness.

[sunsetdawn20]

Thank you, glad you liked it. :) I wrote this quite some time ago, and I think in Will's case I was heavily influenced by an original character I didn't know back then, he was born a bit later (he's the one on my icon). It was kind of fun to reread it now and realize this. :) Thank you for commenting. :)