the dark things you fear [falling off the edge off the world]

[sunsetdawn20]

title: falling off the edge off the world: the dark things you fear
characters/pairings: Stefan/Klaus/vampire!Jenna, this chapter: Jenna/human
rating: NC-17
word count: 980
warnings: blood
summary: Klaus left Mystic Falls with Stefan and a newly turned Jenna and he enjoys breaking his new toys.

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Comments

[fictionalfemme]

Out of curiousity, how did vampJenna survive the ritual? Was it Caroline and Tyler who were sacrificed, and so the backups didnt get used? Does that mean wolf-girl is alive? .... I have a million questions about how the verse split off from the show, but I guess you'll get around to it eventually.

Can't wait <3

[sunsetdawn20]

Good question, it occurred to me too but I decided I'll come up with something when a prompt comes up that gives me an idea. As I said in the first installment, I don't have plans for this, I'll just take this one prompt at a time and we'll see where it gets me. :)

But it's a great thing you have questions, it's the best compliment actually so thank you so much. :)

Would you like to choose a prompt from the table for the next part? Any prompt.

[fictionalfemme]

How about 'original beauty'?

[sunsetdawn20]

Ok, thanks. :)

[nelisce]

I am really loving this 'verse so far. I never really cared about human!Jenna, tbh, but I have to admit I find your vamp!Jenna very intriguing. Can't wait for more! :)

[sunsetdawn20]

I loved Jenna at the very beginning but she wasn't treated well. She was more like a tool than a proper character, she didn't have much of an own story she was just there whenever something had to be done and the others weren't available. It annoyed me bc she had potential for more. Same goes for her death. She would have deserved a chance to explore being a vampire.

Thanks, I'm glad to hear you like it. :)

[irishcookie]

Can I just say "THIS"?

I loved Jenna too and I really feel like she was not fleshed out, merely a prop to get the storyline going (I see Bonnie in a similar fashion - a quick fix to all their problems, grr). I think she had wonderful potential and I am still a bit angry that she was killed off prematurely.

[sunsetdawn20]

Couldn't agree more. And yes about Bonnie, very often Jeremy too if you ask me. But you know what is odd? Alaric. I mean, it's different, he's much more fleshed out than Jenna was, but compare him now with the way he was in S1. Back then he had an aim, he had his own opinions and goals and balls to act. Now he's the Salvatore brothers' bitchboy. He's called when he's needed but left out when it might be inconvenient to have him around

[sunsetdawn20]

Thank you! Great to hear you're enjoying this.

[irishcookie]

While the master's away, the children will...snip at each other. LOL, despite the horrid conditions (Jenna petting her latest victim...the whole thing was a bit creepy) the thought of Stefan and Jenna acting like little children was amusing. Like another review, I wonder why Jenna compels them to love her - perhaps a hold on her human side? Although, as his end shows - too much of a reminder does not bring out the good side of Jenna!

I am looking forward to seeing how these relationships play out.

[sunsetdawn20]

I have to admit my favourite scenes in the show tend to be darker, creepier ones, esp lately because I'm not at all approving of Elena's mission of taming Damon, destroying his defenses and breaking his fangs. Damon all humble and apologetic in front of her seems wrong bc whatever she might believe he's not human... there's a reason humans don't live forever, all she's doing is causing him pain.

Anyway... remember that scene from way back where Damon bring Vicki up on that roof and compels her to think Stefan attacked her? And then in the end he crouches down next to her, takes her in his arm, and caresses her hair as he compels her again to think something else. It was one of my favourite Damon moments. Because he looked so unbelievably gentle even as he was fucking with her mind. I loved that.

[irishcookie]

Oh I had forgotten that moment. You are so right - I love it when a villian uses kindness to manipulate a victim. It is just as effective as violence - but more devastating if that makes sense.

[greeneyespurple]

I've decided I need a VD icon, brb.

So, back to the story. Even though it felt as if there was little of Stefan in this, I feel you wrote him perfectly in all the little details. Jenna is great in this, dancing between being human (you can say what you want, but those annoying questions are human to me :P) and a vampire.

I loved the way you are rounding off Klaus (in a good way), giving him more depth.

[sunsetdawn20]

-cuddles adorable icon- I love the way Elijah is looking at naken!Klaus. -grins-

And yes, the questions are definitely human, just like the assumption Stefan will give a straightforward answer.

[greeneyespurple]

He is looking at naked!Klaus thinking: Why am I here with my naked brother, when I could be with Ria?
;)

[sunsetdawn20]

That's a lovely icon btw! :)