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Through a Father's Eyes

Dec 11, 2009 17:54

Title: Through a Father's Eyes
Rating: K+
Characters: Charlie, Edward, Bella, Jacob
Author: SunnyZim
Summary: Charlie is often sidelined. But what was he really thinking as he watched his daughter's relationship with Edward Cullen? How did he feel when Edward left her? Why did he like Jacob Black so much? And what secrets of his own did he have? ( Read more... )

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rawrtothefifth December 11 2009, 17:38:29 UTC

awww this was so nice! It really makes sense as to why a father would pick Jacob. I think this is good :]

sunnyzim December 11 2009, 18:00:33 UTC

Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it:-)

thankthatstar December 11 2009, 20:49:02 UTC

omg, i loooove this. i think you captured Charlie really really well, and if the books were from his POV i think this is possibly what it would be like! well done bb :)

sunnyzim December 12 2009, 08:54:11 UTC

Thank-you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and think I did a good job with Charlie:-)

laura_luvage December 12 2009, 00:16:49 UTC

Love this, it's nice to see a Charlie fic :)

sunnyzim December 12 2009, 08:56:27 UTC

Thank-you!

quamquam20 December 12 2009, 06:37:57 UTC

And best of all, he started to get to know his daughter again. They chatted. They laughed. She told him things. They had fun together. He got her back.

Awwww, Charlie!! ♥

Great job bb :)

sunnyzim December 12 2009, 08:57:51 UTC

Thank-you:-) I'm glad you enjoyed it!