Update: Claret Sky

[sunnepho]

*bashes head against wall*

I seriously had zero intention of continuing this. The disjointed vignette style is difficult for me. But I am almost finished another playthrough of FFXII, and the plot bunny just keeps kicking me. There's so much more that can be done with this idea, it says, bashing me over the head.

So here I go. Updates will hopefully

Comments

[sinnatious]

Nice! I thought the previous part ended wonderfully and stood strong as a one-shot, but always happy to see more. It's nice, too, to see something of Vaan's... I guess you call it rehabilitation? We kind of catch glimpses of his past self, not just back when they all travelled together but also the time intervening.

Larsa has quite the way with words - as you expect of such an aristocrat.

Most of all enjoying some Balthier/Vaan with some fairly deep plot.

[sunnepho]

Thank you for reading!

Ah, yeah, I know it's starting out kind of dull. With a one-shot, it has to be all bam-bam-bam movement! because every word counts, but now I want to meander a bit and deal with all the backstory and rehabilitation that was previously unspoken. Give Vaan some time to heal and be maybe a bit awesome, though we wouldn't want to upstage Balthier.

Gonna take a while to get through everything I really wanted to include, plot-wise, so thanks for your patience! :)