Reposting: Cracks

[suninmybones]

1,2, 3.

1, 2.

1, 2, 3, 4.

Don't step on the cracks. I'm coming, Sammy.

Sam's had a hard time being his brother lately. Dean knows he feels like he's not, like he's more demon blood than he is Dean's brother. But that's not true. Anyone can define Dean as Sam's older brother, so the other side of that is still, it's still what it is. He'll never

Comments

[roque_clasique]

Very nice job! And a creepy ending to boot :)

Welcome to LJ!!!

[suninmybones]

^^ Thank you. Very nice icon, by the way.

[hoodietime]

I second that welcome! Welcome to LJ! ;)

This was great. I really like your writing style.

[suninmybones]

^^ Thank you!

[ellex42]

Wow...I can almost hear Dean saying this to himself. Stream of consciousness is not easy to write effectively, but you've done a fantastic job of it.

[suninmybones]

Thanks very much. ^-^

[lucid_babbles]

Creepy...but great nonetheless!

[suninmybones]

^^ Thank you.

[xwacky]

Welcome to LJ. I hope you are here to stay!

By my own carelessness and too quick jumping to conclusion, I thought this is a crack!fic at the beginning. However that notion was soon dispelled once I started reading. I love how you captured Dean's messed up psyche here. But through it all, his need and determination to save his brother stayed the same. This headtrip hurts in an oddly "gorgeous" and "good" way.

I'm hoping to read a lot more fic from you in the future!

[suninmybones]

Hah- yeah, I can see how you would mistake it for a crack!fic.

^^ Thank you- I'm glad you liked it! I'll definitely be posting more soon.