[VF Fic] He Slayed 'Em

[sunflower1343]

Third and last Career Fest fic:

This is another response to the ninja prompt. It wasn't exactly what the original prompt requested (it started out as a death fic, then became something strange and twisted), so I called it an anti-fill and posted it at the end of the fest.

Title: He Slayed 'Em
Pairing/Characters: Asami/Takaba
Scenario: Aki is a

Comments

[darkyaoiangel]

Delightfully twisted. I don't think I've ever read anything like this before. Nor did I think I'd enjoy something like this, but I did.

The first omake made me laugh so hard.

Takaba sighed. "If you can make me beg for it, then it won't exactly be rape."

"Oh my clever boy. It never was, was it? That's the whole joke."

Tee hee hee.

[sunflower1343]

I think the clowns have scared everyone away LOL! No one thinks they will enjoy it. I'm glad you did though. Thanks for trusting me. ^__^

I have to admit I was very leery of including those two lines, but they really had to be included because that is so them.

Thanks for reading this and commenting! :)

[n_hara]

Clowns and anything with them connected are not my cup of tea. I really can't imagine Asami as a clown. But I loved the feeling of madness you created, you made it so alive! Thank you, it was nice feeling to be involved into this atmosphere.

[sunflower1343]

It's pretty clear this story isn't for everyone lol. But still, if Asami wasn't convincing that means I wasn't doing my job. Sorry. :( I'm glad you enjoyed the atmosphere of it. Thanks for taking the time to read it. :)

[n_hara]

Oh! You did great job! As for me, if I have to choose for Asami a circus type of job, then I would stopped on conjurer.

[raleth]

woah!! this is creepy!! but i loved the omake!!! ahahah!!n. 2 and 3 were just so funny!!!!!:D

[angel0399]

Lol very different take on them but I liked it still =) Loved the shadow clones!

[misekatte]

O.O When Asami came onstage as a clown, my first, admittedly horrible thought was ... John Wayne Gacy. But turns out the story was really great and brilliantly original! And the omake after was a "scream and a half" *snickers and hides*

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! I think a lot of people hated this because, well, clowns. Everyone hates them LOL. But I think Asami has a wicked sense of humor, and he'd make a great dark clown, especially if pushed over into insanity..