[ficlet] VF: A Step in the Right Direction

Dec 24, 2008 00:36

Title: A Step in the Right Direction ( Read more... )

feilong, yoh

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 11:26:13 UTC
Thank you my dear. I hope your Christmas is a lovely one too. :)

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lilybenkyosuru December 24 2008, 07:17:21 UTC
"....this was a choice between one who owned my life, and one who owns my heart, body, and soul." "Friendship would never be enough. But it would be a start...." *sobbs* *hugs Yoh* Yoh rawks ! *sobbs* beautiful and touching, as always..
*bows* saankyu for sharing neee, I'm all for Fei-Yoh! Will you consider a sequel ? Onegaishimasuuuuuu....

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 11:27:18 UTC
Thank you. I'm not much a one for sequels though. But I'm sure I'll write more of this pairing. :)

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lilybenkyosuru December 24 2008, 13:28:52 UTC
Yayyy.. more of Fei & Yoh *jumps around*.. I hope you can continue with the ""Friendship would never be enough. But it would be a start...." kyaaaaa <3<3<3 *Lily daydreams :P*
*bows* Saankyu neee again Shelly ^^ (allow me to call you that V^_^V)
ps : and hope you're all better now, nee, Merry Christmas !^^

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lilybenkyosuru January 28 2009, 06:52:38 UTC
nee Shelly, gomen to bother you a bit nee, here you wrote "A dark night some nine years ..". Is this 9 years written in the manga? If yes, can you please tell me where? I can't find it nee.. *scratch head*. Saankyu in advance Shelly. Hope everything's fine at your side ^__^

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char_comet December 24 2008, 07:23:02 UTC
Thank you so much for this lovely Christmas gift. It was nice to see Fei Long having a little faith again and Yoh some hope (though I would have not minded to see something more XDD)
Have a Merry Christmas and happy holidays ^_^

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 12:15:32 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd have made it longer only I had this and the other to do before leaving for my parents' home. Although now it looks like I won't be able to go because of icy roads. :( Ah well, I can spend time writing. You have a Merry Christmas too. :)

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commonlogic December 24 2008, 07:23:47 UTC
Oh god, Yoh is fantastic. Again, I really need to reread VF and focus a little more on him. These two interest me and I've been wondering what's in store for them in the future. It almost has me thinking about whether or not future VF stories might focus on them a little bit.

Anyway, well done as usual, and thanks for sharing.

Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, and all that *hugs* ♥

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 12:05:26 UTC
Yoh is just waiting for someone to fill him with thoughts LOL, so he's a writers dream. XDD Though Sensei has given us a few clues. He's really hard to pin down though. Mr Mysterious.

Merry Christmas, and enjoy your vacation! *hugs*

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elaavar December 24 2008, 07:49:45 UTC
Oh, what a wonderful Christmas gift! thank you! It's beautiful and just the tone that I feel Fei and Yoh should have at this point!

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sunflower1343 December 24 2008, 12:03:13 UTC
Thank you. :) They have an awful lot to work out between them if anything is to come to pass. I'm very curious about where Sensei might take this, if she takes it anywhere.

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