[fic] VF: Maybe, Part 2

[sunflower1343]

Title: Maybe, Part 2 (for club_sion's Feilong Love challenge

Comments

[mtarashidango]

*sigh* That's some fine wooing he done ^___^ The gifts were sweet, but his dilligence in getting Fei to know he means what he says was even sweeter.

Dare I say Fei was a bit on the bitchy side (*LOL* Poor Yoh) until he started to warm up to Mikhail's courtings? XDD He's a tough nut to crack, but he's been done wrong too deeply - I'm glad this story has someone who seems to be getting through that tough exterior :)

"I was thinking how grateful I was that you put away the Kentucky Fried Chicken look this evening."
ROFLMAO!!! *hands Mikhail a bucket of KFC for his troubles* *runs away*

The last part is so promising and sweet :) I liked the lead up to the date - it gave me a big feeling of anticipation for how Mikhail was going to go beyond using money/material things to get Fei's love. His words were earnest and moving :) Looking forward to more if there is *puppy eyes*

*hugs* Another wonderful piece! Thanks for sharing with us!

[sunflower1343]

Yea, Fei was very bitchy. He was not really happy with himself, he was unsure, he was nervous, and I'm starting my period, all of which makes him a bitch just like me. XDD There you go, way TMI, LOL!

There is more. I'm writing more. But I'm so damned giddy from finishing this, and from staring at Yoh's pistol, that I think I must go to bed before their dinner turns into a Monty Python sketch (which Yoh would surely love). Plus, I did Fei at dinner once. I have to really make sure I'm writing this Fei at this dinner and don't lapse. Plus I need Pamprin. And chocolate.

OK, bedtime now. *hugs you*

And thanks!

[nnayram]

Regarding Part 3: no maybes. Do it, do it! *poke* *cough-is impatient-cough*

I actually think those two would have fun in bed and out of it, and would not be bound by silly rules, like who is on top. I love the way you descibe their characters and the interaction. And I absolutely adore the first part of the story, which I just finished reading, too.

The gifts were interesting. Mikhail seems the perfect lover. And I am only too happy to see Fei Long treated as he deserves to be.

[sunflower1343]

Hmm, there's something about you. I'm now 2 pages into part 3. I wasn't even sure I wanted to write it. But now I'm writing it.

*hands you an award, sash and crown* Ladies and gentlemen, may I present Miss Inspiration 2007!

*Feilong kisses your cheek*
*Mikhail kisses your lips* (he's wanted to lay Feilong for years now)

Okaaay, I think maybe it's time for some sleep. *note to self: do not look at icon and get more ideas*

[butterfly17000]

This fic is excellent! The description of the butterfly garden swept me off my feet, it felt so surreal...

I love it when Fei saw the blue butterfly settling on the yellow fuzzy weed. It seems to signify their destiny, and Fei knows it. Sweet!

[sunflower1343]

Thank you so much! That place and its butterfly garden and their setting for dinner in the next part are all real. When I saw it, I knew that's where Mik would take Feilong. :)

Feilong is much more relaxed in the next part, and is able to have some fun.

[youko_slytherin]

I love this pairing! ^^ I liked Mikhail since he first showed up, touching Fei's hair... *dreamy sigh* I hope chapter 3 comes out soon ^O^ good luck with that!

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! I'm working on ch3. It's just tough for me to write because I already did something similar with My Dinner with Feilong. But I have to give them the chance to talk, so I must deal with it. I hope you guys like it when it comes out.^^;

[sasheenka]

I love you! *__________*

You know, SASHARI might be silly, but this is just as we imagine Mik to be....(though I'm kinda afraid the manga will proove us wrong...lol)

Thank you for this great romantic fic....I'm looking forward to more!

[sunflower1343]

Thank you! I wish he'd be nice too, but it doesn't seem like it will happen. :( But here in this fic I can make him any way I want. :)