[fic] VF drabble: Mommy

Feb 01, 2007 22:21

Title: Mommy
Rating: PG
Spoilers: none
Warnings: angst, from Feilong's childhood

Notes: Another fic for Feilong, this time just a tiny thing. This is pretty sad but it's pugpugsley's fault for talking about his mother. I'm very sorry to give this birthday drabble to Feilong. ;_;

Mommy )

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pugsley February 2 2007, 03:49:31 UTC
OMG *wipes a tear* And this time it is a tear for sadness!! Poor little baby Fei Long and mean old Yan!! *hits yan in the head*

I just want to grab Fei Long and hug him and tell him that he is a good little boy and lots of people love him and his daddy and mommy loved him very much!!

Hey don't go blaming me for this sad story!! What is it they say "Don't shoot the messenger" and that is what I am!! *wipes another tear* But it was really good as always and I can certainly see why you cried when you wrote it!!

Thank you for sharing a beautiful, if not sad, story with us about our beloved Fei Long!!

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sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 20:54:49 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this, but I hope I can write a happier one for next time. :) Thanks for the idea though!

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mtarashidango February 2 2007, 04:21:17 UTC
Stupid Yan!! *hits him on the head with the GC and shoves the PC up his butt*

*gives kiddie Fei a hug* so sad ;_; He really needs someone who'll help him think better of himself!

Come to think of it, has YA ever mentioned anything about Fei's mother? It would be interesting to find out exactly what all the connections are... Liu, Toh, Asami, Fei Long....

It was sad, but it's nice to see you writing again :) *hugs* Thanks for sharing!

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sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 20:51:57 UTC
No, there's been no mention of Fei's mother. I just make it all up on my own. ^^;

I think they're all interrelated by inbreeding, and it's just going to be one big incest-fest one of these days. *runs like hell*

Perhaps kiddie Fei needs kiddie Mikhail *pictures a toddler in white with strained peas on his bib, trying to get into Fei's diaper* .... No. And kiddie Yoh probably wore bad suits even when he was two. I can't see him cheering up Fei, though he could hug him. Hmm. Hey! You're Fei's age! Kiddie mtarashidango can make him happy, and give him stuffed tofu! Yay!

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nafra February 2 2007, 08:52:00 UTC
Reading that makes me want to crawl back into my bed.
Read sad things when I wake up isn't good for the mood.
*slaps evil brother

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sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 20:45:02 UTC
:( Sorry. *pets* You might like the other fic I did more. Though one character you dislike is in it (but Fei comes out looking better than him).

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rose_mina February 2 2007, 10:52:37 UTC
That's... downright depressing. ;_; But it's his birthday! Poor Fei, feeling like he doesn't belong. And I wanted to hate Yan for the way he acted towards Fei but you had to make me feel sorry for him. And oi, the foreshadowing. *hugs Fei*

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sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 11:54:04 UTC
I felt kind of bad about this one myself. But I did a happier birthday fic too.... ^^;

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twistedsheets10 February 2 2007, 11:25:14 UTC
Wonderful. I could almost see little Fei doing that. I feel so sad about him.

And Yan was just an absolute little beast.

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sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 20:43:11 UTC
Thank you. :) I think Yan's need to dominate Fei started for a reason like this, an inferiority complex that grew into a monster that controlled him. Poor Fei, being on the receiving end of that. :(

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twistedsheets10 February 4 2007, 08:05:28 UTC
In more ways than one, I fear.

*kicks Yan*

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