[fic] VF: The Key to it All: Ch4

[sunflower1343]

Title: The Key to it All
Pairings, Characters: Asami x Akihito, Feilong, Tao, Yoh, Mikhail
Rating: R
Spoilers: up to NT8
Warnings/genre: Continuation from NT8, romance

Comments

[belledandyangel]

Now this chapter made me think...we have these 3 beautiful and handsome men in the same room who have this back and forth love triangle relationship...while leaving bunch of admirers outside of their circle...poor those outsiders...but I mean come on these 3 are so incredible in their own unique ways XD

So I was giggling all the way at how they are all friendly together in the same room...but then I know below that bubbling surface there are feeling unresolved yet...

[aoi_aka]

LOL! And now the Wizard of Oz reference. Too funny. Asami finally accepted his feelings. They were always there. This chapter has me smiling. I can feel Akihito's happy glow from here.

[pugsley]

WHAT!? You killed off Akira, the loyal if not overly huge bodyguard for Asami. I love his character. *sniff sniff* But it is great Asami is going to take care of his family forever, but I have the same reaction as Akihito, I "couldn't believe anyone would marry that guy".

The plot is getting more intense and now Akihito is going to be Fei Long's *pet*. I wonder what he will dress him in to pull this one off. Can't wait to find out. Another great chapter!!

[k_a_s_h_k_a]

the business... :P
if asami and fei worked together it wouldn`t be impossible for them to conquer the world :D

hehe, aki thought he could play asami but asami isn`t easy to play ^_~

and asami admitted that aki is important to him *__*

and tao, he`s one hell of a smart kid ^_~
*cuddles him*

*jumps to ch5*

[akuma_river]

Ah, bantering with threats of death. Our Asami is back, kicking ass and taking names. :P