[fic] VF: The Key to it All: Ch1

[sunflower1343]

Title: The Key to it All
Pairings, Characters: Asami x Akihito, Mikhail x Feilong, Tao, Yoh
Rating: R
Spoilers: up to NT8
Warnings/genre: Continuation from NT8, romance

Notes: Looking back, I think the writing in this first chapter is pretty stiff. But it gets better in following chapters, IMO. Someday I may go back and smooth it out.

Comments

[tweety_ich]

Ha! First to comment this time XD

Where do I start...
This story really caught me. I'm so happy you finished it already. I can't wait to read the other parts (so I hope you continued where you stopt just now ^^)
What I like about it: It is so unexpected. So angsty. And yet so funny. I laughed a lot and shouted a lot while reading :)
But one thing: How DARE you do this to MY Asami?! *cry*

[sunflower1343]

You shouted? I don't think I've ever made anyone shout before. Yay! LOL *runs* Thanks for all your comments. *hugs*

[tweety_ich]

You are welcome!
Yes, I get very emotional when reading. I laugh, cry and whenever I think "no, don't do this" I shout ^^
Poor neighbours...

[pugsley]

I just wanted to apologize and say that I know my comments on your last story were way to looooong. I really have to stop that, I always leave long comments, especially on your stories, that is how much they interest me and I like them. So this time I will say a few "short" words~

I love the story as always. I hate Yoh. Hate the people that did that to Asami. I hope Fei Long and Asami work together to get them. I hope Akihito and Tao can help those two. See short!! Now I am off to the next chapter. ;) *hee hee*

[sunflower1343]

Ah, that's OK. Long comments just show your enthusiasm. ^_^ But it's nice that you comment at all, because most people don't. Thank you for that. *hugs*

[belledandyangel]

Awww I wanna cry when I found out Asami was in that badly shape...and Akihito is seemingly stronger in here ( hihi like a heroine in a tragic love story) ... well all I can say is yes -> there is angsty and humor both well mixed into the story...but riveting cause I am looking forward to the story more than the *cough* smexing part XD

[sunflower1343]

Oh, good thing you weren't looking forward to the sex as much, because I left it all out. Sorry. I wanted to keep the rating down, plus I just wasn't in the mood to write it. And writing sex when you're not in the mood... well lol it's like *having* sex when you're not in the mood. ;P

Thanks for all your comments. :)

[aoi_aka]

You weave your magic and leave me crying and laughing. This is just the beginning. The one unexpected twist is Yoh. I hadn't thought that he might ever be a betrayer. Thank you for this first chapter.

[sirius_fasha]

read it all in one go and left completely satisfied! Another great fic from u as usual ^______~ and im completely too dumbfounded to giv any good comment. Its what they call 'The Sunflower1343 Effect'. LOL!! Anyway, thanx very much for sharing this!

[sunflower1343]

ROFL! You really made me laugh out loud. And you're too kind. Thank you so much! :)