[fic] Viewfinder: AU Drabble: Dance

Jun 14, 2005 16:49

Title: AU: Drabble: Dance
Based upon: Viewfinder
Pairing: Fei x ??
Rating: R
Spoilers: None
Warnings: AU, sexual situation with some blood involved

Summary: Fei dances with a beautiful, dangerous stranger.

Notes: After reading lilt_rill’s fic yesterday, I wanted to see Fei dance. Some of you may recognize the person he dances with. It’s only necessary ( Read more... )

smut, feilong

Leave a comment

Comments 30

kawaiigato June 14 2005, 21:49:56 UTC
....Are you just trying to kill me now? You know, I need SOME blood in my brain. Whoooh....feel kinda dizzy...
*falls over*

*reaches up, grabs keyboard*

*typing on floor- has wireless keyboard*
Their hair swirled and mingled, crimson and black, blood and death, baring their souls for those who dared see the truth: they were slayers of men, and their dance was the lust and fire of the kill.
I'm glad the fan was on while I was reading this. This does sound really different than your normal. But it's SO good. *hugs* Man, your range impresses me, woman!!
Now, when is this and Road Trip going up? Man...thinking about them in the same 30 seconds. *sits and stares* Wow. Now, how about we try merging the 2 together, and your beta will no longer be able to walk properly.

Reply

kawaiigato June 14 2005, 21:52:13 UTC
sunflower1343 June 14 2005, 22:07:44 UTC
I can put this up now.

I was going to wait and put Roadtrip up after Sue posted Ch 21 of Heat, for some depression relief. She liked the pirate and parrot as well, something about dying when they appeared.^^

Originally I was going to have Asami and Takaba chasing the pirate (separately of course) out to sea, but I got bored with it. But you never know. *Another* pirate might just show up while they're on vacation. Because no one realizes it yet, but Asami's secretary was never at the restaurant, Hahahahaha!

Uh, I don't mind "Man". I use it that way. I think it's all in how you grew up.^^

Reply

kawaiigato June 14 2005, 22:11:33 UTC
Hmmm...now you're making me want to see Jack Sparrow thrown in with this group...

Reply


dmnutv_archer June 14 2005, 22:26:23 UTC
Um. Yeah. Want to leave a long, well written comment. Cannot.
You stole the last of my few remaining brain cells.
This is..............

And I was just taking a quick break from Ch21.
How am I supposed to go back to work now????
YOU ARE A GODDESS!!!

Reply

sunflower1343 June 14 2005, 22:51:33 UTC
I guess that means it works?^^

I wasn't sure, since it was different than my usual. Thanks.

Though it ended up being less about dance and more about sex. But, now that I think about it, the best dancing always does.^^

Reply


inthefire2002 August 14 2005, 01:10:10 UTC
Fei and Aya???

*dies happy*

Reply

sunflower1343 August 14 2005, 04:15:13 UTC
This is really funny. I had the urge to re-read this today, and I never re-read things. It's one of my favorite things I've written though. Yes, Fei and Aya. I wanted two equals, same profession, contrasting colors. They'd be so beautiful together...

Reply

inthefire2002 August 14 2005, 04:19:05 UTC
I just got done reading the Wk xover with Yohji and Asami. *drools* Are you planning on doing anymore chapters on that one? I would love to see how Yohji attempts to bring the rest of Weiss into Asami's service!!!

Reply

sunflower1343 August 14 2005, 04:26:55 UTC
That's funny you should mention that as well. I just started working on a long VF/WK crossover with ingenius_inc today. We've sketched out the plot and character profiles, and jumped into chapter one this afternoon. It's going to be similar to this, only Aya and Takaba will be the focus.

Schwarz will be in it too. Have you read ingenius_inc's Crawford and Schuldig? They're so tasty. This will be a smutty thing, with Asami abd Crawford being wicked puppet masters. ^_^

Reply


anonymous September 2 2006, 17:08:37 UTC
... HOT.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up