Lost

Apr 15, 2009 17:49

Title: Lost

Genre: An angst  poetry from Changmin p.o.v  (well I guess it angst, kinda hard to differentiate it… =_=)

Lost.....

in a world called insecurity

My hand reaches for a surface called peacefulness

but nothing left..

Just emptiness that dances around the frozen air

Fill up my lung with pain

Tighten my chest...hit my full of ( Read more... )

my dbsk fanfiction

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nighttenjo April 19 2009, 12:43:55 UTC
Omo!I hope minnie dont feel this kinda feeling in reality...it was so...sad.
Gosh,this is sad!!! ><

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1. Just emptiness that dances around the frozen air
Fill up my lung with pain
2. Stifle all screams for a help, among restrained tears of indescribable pain

you have improved alot,lalala~~~ ALot!!!I love this piece <33333

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nighttenjo April 19 2009, 12:44:12 UTC
Oh,and i love ur display pic!!heeehee

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sunflolia April 19 2009, 13:06:52 UTC
AWhh..of course hope he wont..forever
sometimes I feel guilty formaking him like this..but I do promise for a happy story or poem later for him..
mianhe oppa...=_=

ehmm..ehm..i need to calming my self from making my faces turn red like minmin boiled kani XD
Awh..cant believe u also like those lines unnie..^^
Thanx 4 ur support...will try hard to write better..=D

Love you...<33333333

this display pi..I got randomly in gugle..
what a lucky ...^^
really gamsahamnida unnie..
^______^

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nighttenjo April 19 2009, 14:48:54 UTC
A fluff next time?Promise?
But sometimes minnie gives us a very dark n serious atmosphere,no?

I demand a fluff,darling! XD

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