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verbapulchra August 29 2011, 04:18:28 UTC
LOLOLOLOL! Great take on the "ending the family line" thing. Very clever. This was adorable, and I think I'd really like to see a longer version of it. I think it could be extraordinarily cute if we got to see a little more of them.

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saskia399 August 29 2011, 19:11:54 UTC
I agree wholeheartedly! couldn't have said it better!

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mee_eep August 29 2011, 15:29:28 UTC
clever twist to the prophecy

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jayanx August 30 2011, 00:40:55 UTC
Very clever, love the idea of things not meaning quite what you think they do. Kale is truly a patient man.

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elezbed August 30 2011, 11:49:17 UTC
Love this story...They are so cute :p

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yuliares September 5 2011, 03:25:39 UTC
Heehee, cute twist! I agree that I wish we could have had more time to get to know the characters... oh word limits, such cruel masters!

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