Original: "Don't bite back, baby" het

[yuliares]

Summary: Gunner isn't afraid of things that go bump in the night - he's more concerned about the engagement ring in his pocket. Unfortunately, tonight his sweetheart isn't the only thing lurking in the dark.

Also, new Snuggle theme! It's so cute! :D

Comments

[charisstoma]

There's no way she could touch him with that hand without hurting him because of the silver. Going to be a problem in bed. So there must be more to this tale. And what is the problem with her family? So many unanwsered questions.
Obviously I liked this.

[yuliares]

That's a very good point. She'll probably have to relocate it.

And yes... lots of unanswered questions, sorry! I have a bad habit of trying to cram too many things into a snuggle, and they just don't fit. "Simplification" should be my new mantra. ^^

Thanks for reading though!

[oliviaokay]

I agree with charisstoma! Clearly there is more to this story. :3

Your characters felt very real to me, and your prose flows nicely. I liked reading this.

(Gosh, I am having a real time of it with comments tonight. Sorry for the dreaded delete-and-repost comment, I didn't realize you were the author of the story, yuliares! Now your comment to charisstoma makes more sense.)

[yuliares]

No worries! It's par for the course, really, when one cannot edit their comments.

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[aingealwroth]

"worried expression off his face" Think you meant "her" not "his" but I could be wrong there.

And that was awesome, lol.

[yuliares]

Oh dear, how embarrassing! Thanks for letting me know, and for reading as well!