ORIGINAL: "LOVE TO HATE YOU" SLASH

[verbapulchra]

I wrote this very quickly because I was so distraught at the lack of Sunday Snuggles.  Please forgive any plot holes or other issues.

SUMMARY:  Vincent made a mistake a few months ago, and now he's paying for it.  But sometimes mistakes can be forgiven if you admit you're a dumbass.

Comments

[calladyr]

Very cute...I'm not sure why, but for some reason I thought this was a regency historical piece, so it threw me when there was a car. lol But I really like Andrew's seriousness about the contract (adorable) and Vincent's fumbling at the end when he realizes he might be able to start something when Andrew. I just want to...pet them. Yeah, pet them. :D

[havemy_heart]

I'm glad that Vincent realized his mistake and worked to make it right. It ended up very sweet. I wonder if all of the "gifts" resembled Andrew or just the last one.

I also thought this was regency. I'm not sure why - something about the early descriptions and the fact that his assistant was delivering a note, maybe. It reminded me of Sense and Sensibility, when the notes were delivered as the only means of communication.

[verbapulchra]

I think the confusion in setting stems from how much more I could have fleshed it out. This is a much bigger story in my head. I think I may have to rewrite it this week...

[charisstoma]

Yes, flesh it out and make it a bigger story because as a Sunday Snuggle it's sweet but I want more.

[mee_eep]

These two are fun, and Charles LOL I can see a lot of smirking over the wording of tis contract :D

[pockypuck]

Awwwww. <3 I can't help but love how they misunderstand each other and yet get each other so well. This is cute!