Comments | sundaysnuggles: original: "Lost in Translation" Slash

acquiredsight in sundaysnuggles

original: "Lost in Translation" Slash

Jan 30, 2011 15:23

Summary: Tommy's picking up some very mixed signals.

Warning: Here be profanity, and a couple hundred extra words.

( Bars were not Tommy's scene. )

original, author: acquiredsight, status: first time, element: confession, element: kissing, slash

Comments 15

luci0logy January 30 2011, 22:50:59 UTC

“This is perfect.”

Absolutely.

acquiredsight February 1 2011, 00:36:36 UTC

Thanks! I'm sure he'd be glad you agree :)

hsavinien January 30 2011, 23:43:25 UTC

Interesting.

acquiredsight February 1 2011, 00:38:44 UTC

Well, I tried, anyway. Thank you!

hsavinien February 1 2011, 00:41:22 UTC

Interesting is not a bad thing. ^_^ I like the glimpses of world-building.

kiyoshi_chan January 31 2011, 00:02:13 UTC

I love your last line.

acquiredsight February 1 2011, 00:36:01 UTC

:) Thank you so much!

abstract_whisk January 31 2011, 01:50:50 UTC

Oooh, what an interesting scenario. :) This is a cool peek into what appears to be a much larger, more complex world. It's nice to see that things worked out between these two, despite all the worry.

acquiredsight February 1 2011, 00:34:28 UTC

It's sort of a series of related stories, yeah. Thanks :)

lucca_ace January 31 2011, 02:46:12 UTC

I really like how intense the story is. And I was so happy at the end. The last line is made of win and fuzzies, which I wasn't expecting. Much love. =3

acquiredsight February 1 2011, 00:33:44 UTC

Thank you! I was a little worried it wouldn't be schmoopy enough for this community, I hope someone would let me know if it were a bit too intense.