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mazokuspaz November 21 2010, 04:16:22 UTC
"Face like a toolbox" is a term that a fellow author once used to describe someone with a number of facial piercings (tool box has lots of metal = face has lots of metal). Cass is extra-special because hers are multi-colored! You pointing this out reminds me that I was going to add something to this to make it more obvious what I was referring to! Alas, I forgot, and heck if I can figure it out now :P

And thanks and thanks and cheers on your time zone!

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mazokuspaz November 21 2010, 04:21:17 UTC
Actually, as much as I like the toolbox term, I realized that confusing everyone is not what I really want to do, so I've gone and changed that. So thanks and congrats! You're now the only person who knows how it was originally :D

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mazokuspaz November 21 2010, 04:43:56 UTC
Thank you! I had never written femslash before, and I haven't since (this is an old fic) so I'm super glad you like it! :)

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mechante_fille November 21 2010, 05:39:58 UTC
Eeee, cuteness!!! Oh, if this is the inaugural fic, this comm is going to be the best! Dae and Derek are awesome. I hope they'll visit the comm again sometime.

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mazokuspaz November 21 2010, 12:33:18 UTC
There is definitely the potential for continuing fics, I'll admit. Thank you so much!

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pockypuck November 21 2010, 07:27:53 UTC
X3 Spunky characters! This was a lot of fun. I can't tell which part I liked best, everything was great. The endings are both really well-done. :3

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mazokuspaz November 21 2010, 12:34:57 UTC
Trying hard to avoid awkward innuendos: I like my characters with a lot of spunk! (Hm, nope, that didn't work)
Thank you very much!

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pockypuck November 22 2010, 06:55:15 UTC
Lol! XD Is ok, I have the same problems. Hee.

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zeffy_amethyst November 21 2010, 07:55:28 UTC
Love the inclusion of the little brother. XD

And Dae sounds feisty. I like that in a girl. ^_^ Awesome inaugural fic.

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mazokuspaz November 21 2010, 12:38:01 UTC
Derek was ALMOST as fun to write as Dae and Cass, but I have plans for him.
I refused to write main-character-girls of any kind unless they have enough feistiness to really sock someone in the face if they were pissing them off enough. Thats how Cass likes her girls, too ~_^
Thank you!

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