Aww! I feel very snuggled right now. I love the way you told the story from the song, and worked in the war and plague bits, too. And yay for a happy ending!
This is marvelously done. All the squabbling *grins* hiding the love involved. Liked the way you set up the squabbling doing that, first with Tian, before you used it with when the two older lovers remet. I foresee Tian having to go back to Scarbourgh to transport Yasith's household goods back or vice versa. You should write that.
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Third to last paragraph, I think you mean "Priant cut him off" :)
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And that's most def what I meant XP
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I foresee Tian having to go back to Scarbourgh to transport Yasith's household goods back or vice versa. You should write that.
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I have a feeling if Tian goes back for Yasith's stuff he might be returning with a bit more than he expects ;)
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