timing is everything.

Aug 06, 2009 04:36

Inhale, exhale.

Inhale, exhale.

Inhale, exhale.

Hermione chants the two words to herself mentally, shaking slightly from the premarital nerves. She is thankful her face is covered from sight by the overly lacy veil that fortunately, covers her chocolate brown orbs very well. If anything were to give her away now, her eyes would be the first to ( Read more... )

genre: romance, 10 cliché fics, character: hermione granger, pairing: draco/hermione, fanfic50, fandom: harry potter, 1001-5000 words, character: draco malfoy

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rodlox December 19 2009, 06:06:02 UTC
very interesting way of going about it, and I enjoyed reading both pairings in this - bravo!

(not sure what you meant by Ron would know if he looked in her eyes)

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sundaymess December 19 2009, 06:22:13 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. What I meant by that was the betrayal in her eyes. It's not literal, since you can't exactly see betrayal in someone's eyes. But it was a more metaphoric way of showing her paranoia and how she can't really let go. Hope that clears it up a bit.

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