FF: Last Night on Earth

[sundance201]

Rating: Adult. PWP here, folks. Angsty PWP, but PWP nonetheless.

Disclaimer: Nothing that you recognize belongs to me, they probably belong to RTD and the BBC. But definitely not mine. The cut text is from Shiny Toy Guns, "You Are the One".

Spoilers: 'Army of Ghosts' and 'Doomsday'

Comments

[teruel_a_witch]

Gah, this hurts, but in the most delicious way possible ♥

How could he possibly survive losing her?
This strikes especially, since we know just what losing her would do to him :(

“Rose.” Don’t let it be true.

“Rose.” Never leave me.

“Rose.” I won’t let it happen.

“Rose.” You promised forever.

He breathed into the air, “Rose.” I love you.
But this, is just exquisite, definitely my favourite part of the fic, indeed the way he says her name is always so loaded with meaning, you don't need to hear him say it because you just know, and you brilliantly showed just much HUGE his feelings for her are ♥

Everything inside of him railed against the idea. He was never going to let her out of the TARDIS again. She would stay by his side until the end of her forever. She had promised. She had promised.
Ah, my heart. It's in pieces. I just imagine how frustrating and heartbreaking for him it must be because he KNOWS something is going to happen and is unable to do anything about it :(

“Good. Love you, Doctor,” she said, already more asleep

[sundance201]

Gah, this hurts, but in the most delicious way possible ♥

Which is why I love romantic angst so so much. :P

This strikes especially, since we know just what losing her would do to him :(

I really liked this comment, because I was attempting to channel some of Ten's crazy from WoM in this, really capitalizing on the fact that he's always been a little too close to crazy. Same thing with other paragraph you put down, about how he wants to keep her in the TARDIS with him forever. He's just a little bit too close to the edge and always has been and I think that losing Rose is what really started to push him over, culminating with the events of WoM.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I certainly enjoyed writing it. :)

P.S. Your icon is gorgeous. *sniffles*

[teruel_a_witch]

Which is why I love romantic angst so so much.
I'm not one for doomed romances, must admit, but there's just something about Doctor and Rose...you can let them go, the way they make me feel, I was never as crazy about any other TV-couple before and I don't want to lose that feeling ♥
(Still much prefer fluff,though :P)

I was attempting to channel some of Ten's crazy from WoM in this, really capitalizing on the fact that he's always been a little too close to crazy.
I was thinking about WoM too, even though I usually think about him in RB in terms of DD, he was so crazy and desperate when he first lost her, we know that if it wasn't for Donna he wouldn't even make it out of that battle, but I guess he was in a quiet given-up-on-his-life indifferent kind of crazy then and after WoM he was in that fretting, raging against the dying of the light, refusing-to-let-go kind of crazy which is way more dangerous, I admit I kind of wished it was possible that he ripped Universes and got Rose back just for himself *sigh*

He's just a little bit

[sundance201]

Thanks! And no, for these two, forever isn't even close to long enough.

[helygen]

Oh gods this is gorgeous and heartbreaking and it's made me cry (in a good way). Thank you for sharing :)

[sundance201]

*hands over the tissues* I'm glad that at least it was in a good way. :) Thanks for leaving a review!

[knm1234]

This was just lovely. So sad, and also hot. Ah, conflicted!

[sundance201]

Thanks! That's kinda how I felt writing it as well, don't worry. :)

[sundance201]

*hands over tissues* I didn't meant to make you cry!

...Maybe I sort of did, but I still feel bad about it. :) Thanks for commenting!