[Alice Nine; none] "Desperately Wanting", one-shot

Aug 11, 2010 00:31

"DESPERATELY WANTING"

PAIRING: none (if you squint, mild implications of ToraGacchi but no, none really)
RATING: PG-13-ish
WARNING. references to drug usage
GENRE: angst

A/N: I wanted to write a quick 100 words for a music meme but somehow the story expanded to contain almost 800 words. Oops.

SUMMARY: "Take back your life and let me inside/ We' ( Read more... )

pg13, one-shot, no pairing, blindcottonlove, alice nine, angst

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silent_living August 10 2010, 22:35:43 UTC
'I wanted to write a quick 100 words for a music meme but somehow the story expanded to contain almost 800 words. Oops. '

Oops.

Wow... The atmosphere is definitely... I'd say dark, but not totaly. There's a small light.

And that proves again that you're able to write stories that are drastically different. Once again this is amazing. *gives cookies*

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blindcottonlove August 15 2010, 23:25:23 UTC
Yeah, oops indeed :')

Cookies! I haven't gotten any since forever! *accepts with glee* Thanks :) I don't write much angst, so it was good to sharpen those skills too.

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silveryxdark August 11 2010, 14:00:59 UTC
Wow. That was definitely interesting. Sad and dark in its way, but also it feels like there's hope for poor Saga, at the end. I'm a fail commenter myself so well um thanks for writing :D

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blindcottonlove August 15 2010, 23:27:59 UTC
What are you talking about, your comment had much more content than all my comments when put together x)

Anyhoo, thank you :) I wasn't quite sure how I was going to end the piece -it really was supposed to be max 100 words- but... I like the end myself, the hope, so it's nice you're liking it too.

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g0g0_lolitz August 13 2010, 08:01:13 UTC
hmm.
interesting.

made me want to read a longer version of this.

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blindcottonlove August 15 2010, 23:23:12 UTC
I'm glad it picked your interest :) Every once in a while I get this urge to write something dark/angsty, so it's nice to see those pieces find their readers too. Thanks for commenting~

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blindcottonlove August 15 2010, 23:21:56 UTC
Thanks :) Sometimes I have this urge to write something superbly angsty.

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