[a9; ToraxSaga, SagaxNao] "Ceasing in the Sun", chapter#10

[blindcottonlove]

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"CEASING IN THE SUN"
a fan art inspired chaptered story
rating throughout the story: PG-13 - PG-16

Tora and Saga, one of those love stories that should have never happened -or, to be frank, one that never did happen. Or how does a love story without

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[maunetjeret]

Hrm, I love this chapter, but I always do. It was painful to imagine Saga behind that window, wanting to stop Tora but being afraid to. Fear is such a bitch! On Nao's part too, I wish I could feel more badly for him though. I kind of feel a little heartless since I don't but I, too, believe Tora/Saga just belong together... As to Nao pairings... That's tough. I have a hard time seeing Nao as anything but adorably innocent. Maybe someone who can take him for a spin on the wild side... I'll ponder this and then give you some input.

[maunetjeret]

I totally forgot to comment on the ending... Hello! I can't wait for the next chapter... They will finally meet again! If only Saga and Tora knew it's coming; sneaky Nao. So exciting. I got so distracted by possible Nao pairings... *Lowers head in shame*

[blindcottonlove]

Nao is such a sneaky little bastard♥ And yes, in the eleventh chapter the greatly anticipated reunion will take place! Finally! I'm sorry you have had to wait this long for it ^^;

As the writer of the fic, I'm... kind of in awe how the story turned out to be in the end. I knew from the beginning that I needed some very dark themes but that fear started to play such a big role in it, I didn't quite expect it. But, I certainly love it when my characters start to live their own lives♥ It makes writing so much more fun :D (And, I can blame them for all the inconsistencies :p)

I appreciate your feedback. As I know you've lived through all the previous chapters, you've seen the characters grow and crumble, your words carry serious weight<3

[13blackjewelsff]

OMG :( Heartbreaking chapter!

Im so happy to see this update and I just felt so bad for everyone--Tora leaving & Pon freaking out and---ugh, Saga not going after Tora while he watched from the window killed me That was so sad.

I have tried writing Nao before but I can never find anyone to pair him up with. My OTP is ToraxSaga so I understand why you dont want to break them up XD

I cant wait for the next chapter and I REALLY hope Tora x Saga end up togther because its SO OBVIOUS they love each other but are being stupid boys and dont want to admit their feelings.

[blindcottonlove]

Yeah, their lives aren't actually what one would describe 'fun' at the moment. I never thought this would turn out this dark but... eventually it did, and now I should make my way through it, lol. I want to write fluff sooo badly you people have no idea :')

But! I'm glad that the fic is affecting readers' emotions :) So, thanks for dropping by and commenting♥ I've decided to finish this within the next two weeks, so that I can start to concentrate on other unfinished projects (and university papers, cough), so please, stay tuned for continuation^o^

ISN'T IT TOUGH? Nao deserves fictional love! But... Since all the good men are taken...... Hmpf. I need to brainstorm this a little more.

[basserandstuff]

Aw, good chapter! ^^ Poor Pon. He needs a hug. XD

Hahah, well I personally love Nao with Kai from Gazette. :D And Nao with Saga is always good, but I actually like Nao and Tora, too. There's never enough NaoxKai or NaoxTora.

[blindcottonlove]

I'm a sucker for child-like Hiroto XD; I think there won't be a day when he'd be acting all grown-up and cool in my stories.

I've read some Kai/Nao so basicly yeah, the pairing might work. But I'm a bit worried that there wouldn't be enough of tension? Aren't they a bit too alike, goofy leader-samas? But I could write a fluffy one-shot for a change... Hmm. Thank you, I'm going to think this over :D

Tora/Nao? Well that one is surprising :D All Nao/Tora I've seen is this sweet mpreg miniseries by unna-rainchaser. (Am I living under a Tora/Saga rock or something; is this a popular pairing in general?) Kinda intriguing! Maybe I'll try them♥

Thanks for for all the wonderful ideas, and of course, reading the chap!

[n3uromanc3r]

Actually I read it at night (O.K. it was already today) but I was too tired to comment, but I'm here now!

It's so beautiful, but their suffering makes me sad.
Poor Nao. I guess everything would be better than his current doubtfulness. I wonder if he already gave up deep in his heart, or still has hope in this relationship with Saga.

Hmmm... I don't know... Actually I don't really know the other PSC bands except the GazettE and alice nine. of course, but I think the Nao×Kai pairing is too evident. Or it can be someone from other label too? Anyway it doesn't matter, just make him happy!
O.K. I expect from you a big surprise, a completely unexpected pairing. I know I'm not helping at all... Sorry.

Maybe it could be Uruha... or Ruka from Nightmare (he is even a drummer as well...)

[maunetjeret]

I was thinking Ruka as well!

[blindcottonlove]

Actually, I'm getting warmed-up for the idea :D Since RUKA was there to help Alice Nine to start five years ago, an actual connection between the men exists. Juicy~

[maunetjeret]

Yeah, it's what I was thinking too. It's worth a shot, I think.

[g0g0_lolitz]

ah.

this is the saddest chapter so far since i've been in such a bitter mood because screw-yuuto is leaving the band.

btw, i'm glad that you have such undying love for tora/saga!
but really nao should be paired with someone who is nice and handsome and
tall and have sense of humour.

well,......i think Ruka is a perfect choice.
they'll make a great couples!

[blindcottonlove]

Ah, my sister has been pouting too because of Yuuto :( I'm not much of a Screw fan but it's always sad to see young people quitting bands. Well. Maybe he will find something even better? :)

LOL, this love has become more like an obsession. Well. Not that I mind, really♥

Tall. What a good point. Two chibis wouldn't make a good lovestory~

I've already sketched out a storyline including Ruka/Nao but it's turning into an independent sequal to CitS, so I cannot post it quite yet :D But, I've really started to like the pairing. Maybe it has come to stay<3