Comments | summoner_lenne9: This is what happens when it rains. I write odd poetry.

summoner_lenne9

This is what happens when it rains. I write odd poetry.

Oct 13, 2009 13:28

( Many thanks go to Christian for suggesting 'fella' to replace the retarded 'Hella Bella' stanza )

random, poetry

Comments 3

ala_mokita October 13 2009, 23:03:42 UTC

fella and ol' yella can also be used to rhyme with umbrella. Fun verse, you should write more odd poetry.

summoner_lenne9 October 13 2009, 23:57:04 UTC

.... WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF FELLA? I am now going to change that line into something that actually makes sense :).

I write poetry whenever I can. Which isn't often, I'm only able to... rarely... but for some reason have been able to alot more in the past few months. Which makes me happy :). (Wrote some AWESOME stuff my freshman year of high school, but alas.)

Thanks Christian! :D

library_lynn October 14 2009, 20:03:45 UTC

Misspelling: ceised should be seized. But I like the poem. (High praise: I loathe poetry.)