[Fic]Beach time

Aug 22, 2012 21:53


Spoiler: S4E18
For this hoodie-time prompt
Beta: the awesome nightrider101

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kalliel August 23 2012, 03:25:30 UTC
Very cute. <3333 Thanks for filling this!

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summerholt August 23 2012, 23:34:31 UTC
Glad you like! :)

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angeltrap August 23 2012, 04:55:42 UTC
Adorable! Thank you so, so much for taking my prompt and writing this wonderful piece for it. :) I loved grumpy-but-indulgent!Dean and annoyed-but-also-indulgent!Sam, and the little girl with the band-aid, telling Dean it'll be better now that she's kissed it, was probably the cutest thing ever! The little details - like Sam's attempt to prevent ogling by picking a family beach and Dean's thoughts about the Speedo-wearing guys that inhabit them - made me grin, and the ending was all kinds of sweet and even a little bittersweet since we rarely see them laughing and smiling.

Thank you for this!! ♥ I woke up to a long, difficult day at work, and finding this to read while I drink my morning coffee absolutely made my day. :)

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summerholt August 23 2012, 23:39:00 UTC
Awww, reading your comment made me smile. It feels good to be able to ease you into a hard day with this little piece that your prompt has inspired. Great prompt!

I like the details of a story. The Speedo part belongs all to my dear beta. XD - She has a fine sense of humor. I'd say that her humor is more loud and colorful, while mine is more subtle and subdued. I know Sam and Dean don't have much to smile/laugh about. I'd really like to see them happier. Sigh.

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nightrider101 August 23 2012, 23:20:58 UTC
This is adorable, hon! The boys deserve a nice beach trip (even if Dean has a tendency to get sunburned). :) Any time they get a little downtime, I'm all for it!

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summerholt August 23 2012, 23:40:51 UTC
Me too! Poor boys. They've suffered several lifetimes now, figuratively and literally, they should leave their jobs to someone else and start party!

Thank you so much for the betaing! You made it so much better!

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sailoreyes67 September 2 2012, 16:30:37 UTC
awww, this is perfect. I love the sweetness at the ending. <3

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summerholt September 18 2012, 01:42:50 UTC
Thank you! I like them being sweet and happy...

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