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vegawriters February 13 2011, 21:22:42 UTC
I loved this. It was a great breakdown of their relationship and an interesting take on the conversation with Hodges.

He referred to the Kama Sutra as ‘that damned book’ ever since his sciatic nerve put him out of commission for nearly three weeks.
This totally made me crack up.

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x_rianne_x February 13 2011, 23:06:52 UTC
Ha ha! Sex pots! This really made me laugh - of course he would bring her their very own pot! No one could resist that!!

'the two of us looking at each other and holding hands'

Lovely!

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sockglue February 13 2011, 23:25:03 UTC
Enjoyed reading this. As vegawrtiers said, it is a fantastic breakdown of their relationship.

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elfling65 February 14 2011, 01:56:58 UTC
Perfect... I love your take on why they are doing things separately. It's makes absolute sense, and it's so them! "The damn book" and "the nerve incident" cracked me up. Thank you.

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kosmickway February 14 2011, 02:31:12 UTC
FLAIL!

OMG, FLAIL FLAIL FLAIL EPIC FLAIL!

This is perfect! It's wonderfully funny and sweet, tender, amazing, and so perfectly encompasses everything between the two of them.

I love that you get into Sara's insecurities-- because of COURSE she has them-- and even how the perceptions of the guys at the lab come across-- because those are exactly the kind of things they'd be thinking. This was deeply thought provoking.

Holy hell, this was just amazing. It was the kind of fic I wish I could have written because it makes me wish I had that kind of insight into SAra and Gil.

Rock on, my dear. Rock the FUCK on!

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