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tld8of9 June 19 2013, 17:37:01 UTC
To bad about Riley.
But if he had gone back and they were able to help him; I think the grief over what he did would have driven him insane.

Great Chapter, I am a second degree black belt and I could picture the scene perfectly. Well. done.

T. Dunn

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littleotter73 June 20 2013, 17:34:12 UTC
Riley... poor guy! Yeah, he was already insane. Take away the drugs effects and it just would've been way worse.

Thank you!

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chevron17 June 21 2013, 03:58:31 UTC
"We're not sparring . . ." Whooohahaha!

Oh, come on, you two . . . don't delay talking again!

Sigh.

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littleotter73 June 22 2013, 15:22:54 UTC
Riley with the tough talk...

Yeah...

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harmony033 August 1 2013, 22:23:51 UTC
Good ending - glad Riley was more of a Jekyll/Hyde rather than just a full evil monster. I like how essential Ethan was, but how most of his action was done off-screen. And oh THE DRAMA - just get those two together please!

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