Forbidden Flame

May 30, 2011 02:16


Title: Forbidden Flame (part 3)
Pairing: HanHae
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Donghae was just a plaything who was bought to please.  And it’s not even fun when he falls for the one who paid to keep him, who also vowed never to love.

“Don’t be stubborn. He’s just a pet, and don’t you dare talk to me like that.” )

fanfic, forbidden flame, hanhae

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melodyprower11 May 29 2011, 21:34:29 UTC
*giggles in glee* Hannie oh Hannie! You liiiike Him! You liiiiiiike Him! Kyahahahahahahahahahaha! VICTORY!

now for the realization... oh whats next whats next? Hannie will realize? not yet? soon? omggggggggggg ANTICIPATION!!!!!!

fwaaaaaaaah~ hannie POV makes me so excited! I like it so much *squeals*

Next! next! I wanna know what's next! Hannie! Donghae! GAH!

.......

I have a feeling my excitement has made this slightly incoherent. I apologize. Better and Better and Better Summer! Can't wait Can't Wait! <33333333 Saranghae!

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summer0smiles May 30 2011, 00:43:30 UTC
WHY ARE YOU SO PRECIOUS?! HCSKVYSJRGSKSK you make me so happy with your comments!! XD

Don't worry, bring in the incoherencies for all this is worth, and besides, hanhae needs no coherencies!! Heehehe~ oh you'll see in future chapters what hannie is really feeling. Hm, but i have to say, it'll take quite some time for the ever clueless hannie to realise his own feelings. *grins*

*flails* THANK YOU TORI!!! LOVE YOU FOREVER AND FOREVER!!! Hehehe~

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melodyprower11 May 30 2011, 01:04:48 UTC
Kyehehehe *blushes* <3

LOL I just realized, in both our chaptered fics, we both have Hannie who is in love with Donghae but is clueless about it, but mine is all cute and kiddie and yours is all.... not, but in a yummy delicious sexy way. we went about it in totally different ways ahhahaha~

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summer0smiles May 30 2011, 01:56:22 UTC
Omg?! You're right! Hehehe. Oh, we're just the same but yet so different. XDD I love this similarity and contradicting differences between us. :)

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gunhaeree May 29 2011, 21:36:54 UTC
Oh my god I LOVE THIS!!!
Hangeng is so super possessive toward his belonging!!!!

Waiting for the next chapter here,
thank you for this ^^

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summer0smiles May 30 2011, 00:46:24 UTC
Hehehe~ THANK YOU!! yes yes, we all love possessive geng + submissive hae! XDD

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sjh20 May 29 2011, 22:00:10 UTC
wow~
Hanni is in love~ awww~
he should realize it soon~ hehe~
thanks for the update ^^

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summer0smiles May 30 2011, 00:48:41 UTC
He will!! He will finally realise Hae's importance to him. XDD
THANK YOU!! Hehe.

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rinda_sjfishy May 30 2011, 04:19:15 UTC
omooooooo unnie i loooooooove thisss!!really looooooooove this!!
i love the idea of hangeng being possesive toward hae and hae is so submissive here..kyaaaaaaaaaaaa i love everything about this story! *runs around the class heheheheheehehehe
unnieeeeee, who's that man?please dont make hannie to give hae to that man!!i looooooooooove hanhae here!!hehehehheheehe
and i wnat hannie to love hae and hae can own hannie too!!hehehehehehehehehe
thank you unnie, i really really looooooooove thiiiiiiiissss!! <333
please keep possesive!geng and submissive!hae because i love them to be like that!!heheehehehehee ^^
bye unnieeeeeeeeeeeee, waiting for moooooooore!! XDD
LOVE YOU!! :DD

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summer0smiles May 30 2011, 12:47:22 UTC
*jumps onto you* LOVE YOU TOO!
Come here you sweet little marshmallow, let me give you a super duper tight hug. XD THANK YOU! Thank you for loving my HanHae in here. (:

Oh, dont worry, I'll definitely keep the possessive geng and submissive hae in here. Hehe~ I'M LOVING THEM JUST THE WAY THEY ARE RIGHT NOW *giggles*

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rinda_sjfishy May 30 2011, 13:03:21 UTC
uwwaaaaaaaaaaa *comes to you!! hehehhehe
thanks for the really tight hug!!and... saranghae!!heheehehee
OMOOOOOO, YOU ARE SOOOOOOO SWEET TOO!! WANT TO SQUISH YOU RITE NOW!! *huggles :pp
awwwww you are veeeeeeeerrrrryyy welcome unnieeee..because i like hanhae!!no......love hanhae!!hehehehehehe

okay okay thank you sooooooo so much unnieeeee!!and now i cant wait for mooooooore!! blame you *tackles you XDD
neeeeeeeeeeeee, i love them toooooo!! really unnieeeeeeeeeeeeee *hi5 hehehehhehehe

btw thanks a lot unnieeeeeeeeeeeeee, give me a spot next time!!hehehhehehehehe *hands you cookies ^^

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us_jessica June 1 2011, 10:01:03 UTC
Oh oh is that mean Hannie like him? Yaaaay *jumping up and down*
hope he realize it though ...
Ahhh this made my day ,,,
Hugs you super tight ....

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summer0smiles June 2 2011, 14:34:06 UTC
Hehehe~ YOU made my day! ^^ *huggles* THANK YOU

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