Comments | sumi_tatsuha: I am so shameless

sumi_tatsuha

I am so shameless

Apr 10, 2010 22:53

Title: Keeping Guard
Words: 478 words
Rating: PG 13, just because of the scenario.
Pairing: Lightning/Hope (if you squint), gen-ish
Summary: Poor Hope, he has to keep guard as Lightning bathes.
Spoilers: None if you’ve finished Chapter 4.

( She wouldn't even pity him. )

pairing: lightning/hope, gaming whatnots, fan fiction, community: hopexlightning, drabbles, fandom: final fantasy xiii

Comments 8

sinnatious April 11 2010, 05:43:21 UTC

This was adorable. Hope's embarrassment and Lightning's comparative lack of modesty was great. Holding out his towel with his eyes closed~ <3 I loved it!

fantasia0829 April 11 2010, 12:01:01 UTC

That was adorable. :D

sumi_tatsuha April 11 2010, 14:22:35 UTC

Ah, thank you!

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sumi_tatsuha April 11 2010, 16:35:51 UTC

Thank you! I spent all day yesterday trying to nail these two down!

evershadowangel April 11 2010, 18:25:31 UTC

I enjoyed reading this! Thank you! &hearts

Now during the day! XD

sumi_tatsuha April 11 2010, 19:34:38 UTC

Glad you did!

Maybe a sequel is in order?

ruinedheaven May 15 2010, 13:28:15 UTC

Okay, I found this adorable and amusing. I almost felt that Lightning did that just to get a rise out of Hope. x3 I keep thinking she secretly enjoys watching his reactions.

Thank you for posting this little piece, it was a relaxing and enjoyable read. I look forward to more Light x Hope fiction from you, I pray you're inspired to write more. :3

sumi_tatsuha May 15 2010, 19:20:51 UTC

Wow, thank you! What a lovely review!

I do plan on writing more, I'm just not comfortable doing in on my parent's computer so I'm holding out until I get my laptop fixed.