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Fic: The Crystal Ship

Jul 31, 2010 07:16

Title: The Crystal Ship
Author: Sulwen
Pairing(s): Adam/Tommy
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1350
Summary: First touches, first kisses.
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine but the order of the words.

A/N: Title is from the Doors song of the same name.

( They haven't even taken their makeup off yet. )

my writing, adam lambert is shiny, fanfiction, tommy joe is a pretty princess

Comments 74

nebt_het July 31 2010, 12:39:37 UTC

Mmmmmm I can really feel the slow and sensual mood here. Hawt too, Great job!

sulwen July 31 2010, 19:01:06 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it! <3

jeweledvixen July 31 2010, 13:45:34 UTC

This was gorgeous. So slow and sleepy and sweet and sexy all at once.

sulwen July 31 2010, 19:01:25 UTC

Yay! Thank you so much! <3

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sulwen July 31 2010, 19:02:19 UTC

EEE, thank you! You know how hard I fangirl you - your praise means a lot! <3

qafaddiction July 31 2010, 16:24:08 UTC

Beautiful! So sleepy and perfect. I loved this line:

They go still, and Tommy feels a spark of desire go through him, as shocking in the midst of his peacefulness as a lightning bolt in a clear summer sky.

sulwen July 31 2010, 19:02:53 UTC

Thank you so much! I enjoyed that line too. <3

on_a_halfshell July 31 2010, 17:23:09 UTC

Wow.I love this..Your writing is so beautiful and descriptive. The flow was amazing.

sulwen July 31 2010, 19:03:44 UTC

Thank you! I spent a lot of time tweaking it so the flow would be perfect - so glad it worked for you! <3