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Jean/Roy 2 (Chapter 6)

Aug 19, 2008 01:13

Title: To Really Free One's Self.
Chapter Title: To Make Things Better
Author: sull89Fandom: FullMetal Alchemist ( Read more... )

pairing: jean/roy, yaoi fics, chaptered stories, character: jean havoc, fic: fma, character: roy mustang, character: zolf kimbley, story: to really free one's self

Comments 2

witchitar08 August 20 2008, 00:00:23 UTC

AGH honey stop with the cliffhangers! D= This is the part I've been waiting for!! Very good honey. It does seem a little rushed in comparison, but that's my only criticism. Hurry and write more, I wanna see what happens!

sull89 August 20 2008, 00:28:46 UTC

It's not a cliffhanger, though? Where is the cliffhanger? I fail to see... I'm sad that it seems rushed though, I hadn't meant it to. I'm just not good with Roy.

... This story was supposed to be a one shot...