Fic: Tangles -- 1/1 -- Harry/Draco

Aug 13, 2008 13:03

Title: Tangles
Author: suki_blue
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Draco, Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione
Summary: Harry's marriage is in a mess and so is his head. Not epilogue compliant.
Warnings:Some relatively graphic het, and death (not Harry or Draco)

Many thanks to my Beta, amejisuto who helped me find my ending and the whole point of the fic, and to literati for reading it ( Read more... )

harry/draco, my hp fic

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kitty_poker1 August 13 2008, 13:04:18 UTC
This is wonderful! Sad, happy, angsty, heartwarming and truthful. It could've happened just like this, with Harry's disastrous but well-meant marriage, Ron and Hermione's tragedy (loved Ron's terror at finally having a girl!) and Harry finally coming to terms with what he really wants. He loved Ginny, in a way, but she wasn't the person for him, and he wasn't the person for her.

Gorgeous writing, hon, a very unusual and effective style. Loved every single word. Molly's advice was perfect. Beached penguins never do well, but you have.

*smooch*

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suki_blue August 13 2008, 15:59:02 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! I'm quite pleased how this turned out. I wanted a whole mix of emotions for Harry to get caught up in, so I'm glad that came across.

Also relieved the style worked. It was something I'd been meaning to try for a while, but I needed to wait for an appropriate bunny to hop my way.

Poor Ron ;o)

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hazel_wand August 13 2008, 14:07:48 UTC
Not that this was smut, really, but I just got the icon and this fic was OMG good, full stop.

I loved loved loved it, the humorous and tragic touches alike. It felt so real and was told in a wonderfully understated style.

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suki_blue August 13 2008, 16:00:41 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the mix of emotions. As for the style, it was a bit of an experiment to see if I could tell a story in fragments, so I'm glad it came off okay!

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laazikaat August 13 2008, 14:28:21 UTC
That was wonderful. I enjoyed that so much, I'm so glad you're writing again. Wonderfully sad and so very well drawn. It could so happen this way. I'm so glad they found each other in the end.

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suki_blue August 13 2008, 16:02:17 UTC
Thank you! It's nice to be writing fanfic again. I did miss it. I think the key is not to write such epics! LOL!

Thanks for reading and commenting, hon. Hope you're well.

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suki_blue August 13 2008, 16:03:06 UTC
Three wows! Thank you so much! :o)

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suki_blue August 13 2008, 16:03:27 UTC
Thank you very much!

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