Fic: Break of Day - Gen - PG

Jan 11, 2008 22:11

Title: Break of Day
Author/Artist: suki_blue
Rating: PG
Pairing: None
Summary: A look at Lucius's first day at Hogwarts
Warnings: A few liberties with canon. I hope they're not too jarring.
Prompt: Head held high but his fingers shaking, little Lucius Malfoy waits for the Hogwarts Express for the first time.
Notes: None

Beta'd by amejisuto

Break of Day )

harry potter, lucius malfoy, my hp fic

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zauza January 11 2008, 23:43:21 UTC
Thank you! I did enjoy that a lot! and I do love Lucius!

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suki_blue January 12 2008, 12:16:03 UTC
Thank you very much!

and I do love Lucius!

Hee! Me too. He's just so lovable, in a hexy, prickly sort of way :oD

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zauza January 13 2008, 02:23:23 UTC
Yes! he can be a mean bastard and yet so yummy!!

oh and i love your icon!!

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crazyasastalker January 12 2008, 12:26:04 UTC
One day in and he already has his cronies AND has vowed to make Hagrid pay? Crikey, he works a bit fast, doesn't he?

After reading this, less Draco, more Lucius I say.
I didn't realise he could be so captivating. :)

(And I'm on the prowl again:
Lucius levitated his own trunk and, after several disastrous attempts and one crushed toe, he finally managed to seat it in the overhead wrack.

Should it not be rack?)

Amazingly written, and I'll definately check out the other fics in the group when I get a free moment.

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suki_blue January 13 2008, 16:05:46 UTC
Thanks for the correction, hon! And for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed. Do checkout the other fics in the community. There should be many more posted over the next month but there's already some good stuff there. Lucius as a highwayman certainly curled my toes ...

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crazyasastalker January 13 2008, 16:13:18 UTC
Never a problem. I don't go looking for them when I get to your page, I swear, despite what other evidence suggests. Honest. :)

I will do. I'm a bit tied up at the minute, me and M been down since Fri eve, but I'll pm you soon with info, and I've got something else taking my time.

But you've given me the writing bug again. On with Heroes fics I say, and reading Lucius ones. You'll have to keep me informed when one of these go up again, I'd like to try it out. Dive in the deep end of the Lake as it were.

Just hope I don't get laughed at as much as Lucius did. :P

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