Comments | suki_blue: Fic: Parity Transformations - Harry/Draco - 16/?

suki_blue

Fic: Parity Transformations - Harry/Draco - 16/? - NC-17

Dec 06, 2007 16:59

Title: Parity Transformations

Fandom: HP

Pairing: Harry/Draco

Rating: NC-17 overall

Summary: Eleven years since he ran from Hogwarts, Draco has moved on. Now in his late twenties, Draco lives a reclusive life in a tiny village in Hampshire. Never in a million years does he expect to cross paths with Harry Potter again. But he does, and there ( Read more... )

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melfinatheblue December 6 2007, 17:27:19 UTC

That was cute and sweet and wonderful...
Best line ever:"‘Yeah,’ Harry said, ‘he only backs into the finest of lampposts.’"

suki_blue December 7 2007, 12:00:23 UTC

Thank you! ~g~

piratesmile331 December 6 2007, 17:54:56 UTC

This was incredibly, incredibly sweet and wonderful. I loved all the little details of their preparation for Christmas and of the day itself. They all have such a warm camaraderie; they really are a perfect family now. Boo! on the Prophet for being intrusive; I'm glad Harry was able to settle Draco down. I love your Neurotic!Draco (teaching poor Kasen to chase down spiders!!!).

And I'm so glad that they finally made love, and that it was (in Draco's words) fantastic. Given their history, it wouldn't have been terribly surprising if things had not gone well, but the fact that they LOVE each other now (even though neither of them can get up the chutzpah to say it) has made all the difference in the world.

Merry Christmas, suki, and thanks for this early Christmas present!

suki_blue December 7 2007, 12:10:09 UTC

Thank you so much! It was a bit of a long chapter, but I wanted to show the warmth of Christmas when you're with people you love and care about. Possibly a bit cheesy, but they all deserved a Merry Christmas. :oD

bryoneybrynn December 6 2007, 18:11:33 UTC

Loved it as always but most especially the Christmas scenes. So sweet and funny. I loved Kasen choking on the mini-quiches and the night finishing off with a bit of vomiting - so Christmas with young children! And I could totally picture the boys screaming over Operation. Very sweet. And finally! a little action - woo hoo. Now how about some sappy "I love you" moments? *looks hopeful*

suki_blue December 7 2007, 12:10:57 UTC

Thank you!

Ah, the sappy moments, I'm sure I can manage that ;o)

ironedpolyester December 6 2007, 18:57:02 UTC

I can't even express how much I love this story. It's just really wonderful and cute and I can tell how much effort you put into the plot and pacing and it pays off wonderfully. And James and Kasen are awesome children! I really like the elements of the press because that's just how I imagine it would be for Harry after the war. Anyways, great story!

suki_blue December 7 2007, 12:30:28 UTC

Thank you so much! It's so satisfying when the plot comes together and everything slides into place.

carma_chaos December 6 2007, 20:05:17 UTC

Merry Christmas Suki and thank you for that wonderful story - it's great to get an in season story with such fluff and realism.

suki_blue December 7 2007, 12:30:57 UTC

Merry Christmas! Thank you!