「90 Minutes」《Chapter 16》

May 31, 2018 19:49

Title: 90 Minutes
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Ninomiya Kazunari
Genre: angst, drama, smut, romance
Length: chaptered
Word Count: 3,855 words
Rating: NC-17

Chapter 16 )

t: 90 minutes, p: ohno satoshi/ninomiya kazunari, r: nc-17, +fanfiction

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niyuzuku May 31 2018, 22:15:59 UTC
yeay finally they clearing the misunderstanding. Lovely scene is here and there. XD Nino like in the bottom more ne~

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sukarideepsoul May 31 2018, 22:38:54 UTC

They finally talked properly and fixed everything to have that lovely moment and enjoy their relationship~ Nino will always like to be the bottom~

Thanks for reading!

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niyuzuku May 31 2018, 22:45:07 UTC
is this the end? I hope not. I still want to know the other slaves future, and ohno and his family relationship.

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sukarideepsoul June 1 2018, 07:44:13 UTC

Iie iie xD I wrote on the post it's not the end by far, there's still so many things to happen!

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90 MINUTES~ melbmermaid June 2 2018, 00:39:59 UTC
Ahh i'm so proud of Nino. He is trying his best to understand Satoshi's actions and to stand by the man he loves. That's so wonderful.

Beautifully written as always.

Thank you!! <3 <3

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sukarideepsoul June 2 2018, 11:19:24 UTC

In a relationship, the two parties have to give their best to make it work, so I think this chapter reflects very well. Let's see if they continue doing it~

Thanks for reading!

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melbmermaid June 2 2018, 14:39:24 UTC
Also I forgot to say before, I really enjoyed how this chapter was from Ohno's perspective as opposed to Nino's in the last chapter. It works really well.

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sukarideepsoul June 2 2018, 15:11:23 UTC

Oh that's so nice to know because I truly like to write both's perspectives!

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mirenamatsumoto June 2 2018, 09:06:18 UTC
This chapter is so WNAJSOQOSS
I totally love them 😭😭
Well, I'm really surprised, I thought that Nino will be afraid or something but no!
I liked the moment when Nino ask to Ohno to hit him, he trusts him 💛💙
And all the love between them after...~ That was great 😏😏
It looks like an end but you said that it still many things so I CAN'T WAIIIIT
It was perfect 😙

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sukarideepsoul June 2 2018, 11:22:43 UTC

Well, a lot of things may happen when a past like that shows up, right? Nino decided to trust him and he wasn't wrong, it's time for Ohno to realize the person he has by his side.
Babe, you perv side is showing up~~
See why do I use cliffhangers? XD The story is not ended at all, if you knew how many things have to happen yet... Yes, the short fic, JÁ.

Thanks for your comment babe 😙😌

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mae74 June 3 2018, 00:41:21 UTC
It’s so good how they are being honest with each other and know that they have each other 💙💛

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sukarideepsoul June 4 2018, 18:41:36 UTC

They are progressing so much lately~

Thanks for reading~

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gambitsfox June 4 2018, 17:28:29 UTC
That was beautiful! They truly have seen each other without any guards up. I think they can take on Jun, his past, or even his mother now. They are still insecure but their love is real and they finally have shown each other that.😊💙💛

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sukarideepsoul June 4 2018, 23:04:36 UTC

They seem so strong now, as if they can overcome anything, but the appearances maybe lie too much... Who knows...

Thanks for reading~

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