When Righteous Turns Foul [12/??]

[sujulovenl]

Title: When Righteous Turns Foul
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): Main!KyuSung, Main!RyeoMin, Main!EunHae, Friendship!KyuSungRyeoMinEunHae, BestFriends!KyuMin, BestFriends!YeWook
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Fantasy!AU
Summary: Infiltrating an antagonistic city is one thing. But living there for 5 years, forming friendships and even finding love, and eventually

Comments

[junnosukex3]

Yeah !! KyuHyun is a hero !!! I really like the "looking into your deepest & darkest secrets" creatures ! I would like to know what all of them heard ^^ It was a really good idea ! And Kyuhyunie is the best ! \0/

Well, I'm very curious about the next chapter, your little introduction is a big temptation !

Thanks for updating this fast !

[sujulovenl]

Muaaa thank you for reading and commenting!<3 Happy you liked the shadow creatures xD They are horrible, but when you pass their test, they are just cute dark black in the shadow living deer XD lols :'D

And haha, don't expect TOO much, but expect at least something XD my beta-reader (so not actual beta'er, but someone who reads the chapters for me to tell me if I should change anything) really liked the next chapter, so haha xD I feel confident :3 Updating soon! :D

Au revoir xP

[junnosukex3]

It's nice to see you confident because you deserve it ! Your story is really good <3

XD Thanks for remembering I'm french ^^
A bientôt ! (It means "See you soon")

[ext_1287767]

Yay, update... ^^ glad i didn't missed it.. Hihi..;p

Interesting.. I love the adventure... ^^

Oh, so Sungmin had a big trauma with his past... Hmmm....

And first time i imagined the dark creature is like "Oh, Is it Dementor?" -_- /slap myself/
It looks like them since the creature sucking their soul with a sad or bad things and then causing them to lose their minds...
Poor Wook here... Feel bad for him... :(
Buuut huaa....glad Kyu stay strong...cooooooooollll.... >.< /hug Kyu/

Ah, sooooooo many KyuSung moments these days..... and it made me can't wait to read next chapter......
Soooo please update soooooooon....XDD

[sujulovenl]

Happy to see you at this chapter again <3 But don't worry if you miss out on a few, I won't eat you 8) .. or will I?

Sungmin had D: He really has a reason to be this way, and now you can see where his hatred/dislike for Osis comes from. He was still young and had to find out the hard way. He just lets hatred blind himself =(

And haha, so many people seem to think about Harry Potter when reading my story XD Honestly, I got the black-dear idea from pokemon ROFL. And it had to be some sort of test, and this was all I could think about, as getting confronted with your biggest and deepest fears is most hardest for people, and it is what makes them weak ^^

And omg, those KyuSung moments really make me SO happy! x.x All my KyuSung feels returned to me, and I can't wait to write again! x.x Chapter 13 is already done and at the Beta'er atm :D All because those KyuSung moments revived my writing spirit x.x I'm happy, SOOO happy XD

Will update as soon as my beta'er is done! ^^

thanks for reading and commenting sweetheart!

[ext_1287767]

o_o Don't eat me!!! I'm bitter... ;p

Oh, so it's from Pokemon.....Hihi.. Ok ok i got it.. thanks for telling me, so next time i I wouldn't imagine about harry potter again... :DD

Woooah...Glad to hear your writing spirit has returned... ^^ Should thanks to KyuSung moment then...XD
Yeay...!! Ok i'm waiting for your update... Fightiiing!!!! ^^

[lalilula]

I wonder what the deer has said to Jongwoon..

thank you for writing this =D

[sujulovenl]

Haha, you might found out later, I'm sure I will find a way to implement it in the story <3 But it's basically something that he regrets/fears the most, as that is what the deer told everyone. Reminding them of everything they failed in doing, or seem to fail in, or think to fail in. To make them feel bad. That bad, that they all just wanted to faint and die and stop feeling anything =( Scary deer. Remind me to not walk into a very dark forest, lol.

Thank you for reading and commenting! ^^ It's written with pleasure! :D

[saviorslife]

Ik ben slecht in comments schrijven maar okay~ XD
Lieve hemel mens, hoezo snelle update~? XDDD

I loved this chapter~ <3
Het voelt zo real, en dat betuigd alleen maar van goede schrijfstijl~ ;)

En ik = Kyusung shipper dus zit nu al blij te doen voor de volgende chapter~! XD

*knuffffff*

[sujulovenl]

Voor het eerst dat ik een Dutch comment krijg :'D Ik ben zo gelukkig~! D':

En ik vind het superlief dat je een comment achterlaat, envind hem super hoor, dus hou je vooral niet in in de future XD (Lol, ik blijf half engels lullen x.x)

anyway, THANK YOUUUU! Al die complimenten D': En haha, awesome, een dutch KyuSung shipper <3 Heb je twitter toevallig? Of heb ik je daar al? We should talk more!

Knuff back at ya <3 Dankje voor lezen en commenten ^^

[rhenny]

WHAT?! I TOTALLY MISSED AN UPDATE!!!
forgive me Mom! I thought this was the same as before... didn't know it's a new chapter!

everyone has a deep secret that the shadows used against them TT~TT wah... seeing them suffer like that really hurts!
good thing Kyuhyun managed to be fight it off! babyKyu is so special! and I really like the sound of 'Cho Kyuhyun of Ordova and Osis' oh yeah!

gee, so much in store for us... right?
thank you for the update Mom! you're really awesome^^
Fighting!

[sujulovenl]

YOU DID! D: Haha, guess you weren't used to me updating this fast anymore XD The KyuSung moments just made me update again, haha xP They were so lovely that I got so happy that I just had to update! T-T

Haha, you like Kyuhyun being seen as from Ordova AND osis? He did got called a betrayer, though XD

Thank you for reading and commenting sweety <3 Updating asap again! :D