title: Unexpected guest chapter 14

Nov 04, 2009 01:00


Title: Unexpected guest
Author: Suju_Shinki
Length: 14/?
Pairing: Yoosu
Genre: Fluff, Crack, Mpreg (tiiiny bit of angst, but it's reallyy tiny!!)
Rating: PG13-NC17
Summary: Junsu gets an unexpected visit from his ex-boyfriend. Huge belly and all.
AN: this is my first chaptered ficcie and I may have failed big time but I'm still learning so..yeah...^^ ( Read more... )

fic:unexpected guest, genre:fluffish, genre:crackish, pairing:yoosu, genre:smuttish

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kyoko_hino November 4 2009, 00:38:09 UTC
aww sorry I haven't commented in a while!
LOL this is basically one of the only male preg fics I like XDDD Chun and his pregnancy excuse works for anything
._. Junsu is too dense.
AND OMG HES FINALLY GOING TO HAVE HIS BABY? woot!

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suju_shinki November 4 2009, 00:57:42 UTC
it's okay bb I'm happy you're back=D
and I'm happy you like it to^^
Junsu really needs to get some sence slapped into him. Don't worry it'll all end well XD
Thanks for commenting<33

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ladygaffes November 4 2009, 00:45:01 UTC
My My My My ...as usual you killed me babe ( ... )

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suju_shinki November 4 2009, 00:52:39 UTC
you didn't miss anything bb it's just that it's normal in their world to have two daddies XD That's why chun is pregnant and all^^ I'm sorry if it was confusing and to short>//<

Junsu is dense but I promise it'll all end well XD

I know I'll miss this fic to~~ T__T
But I've got lots of fic!ideas up my sleeve and I hope you'll support me on those as much as you've supported me on this one. It reaally means alot *sniff*

Thank you for the long and awesome comment! *drowns in warm hug*
ILUVYOU

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laurana1 November 4 2009, 00:54:22 UTC
LOL, I was laughing so hard at the lilies conversation, the way you described it was just perfect. And then:
There were liles everywhere. XDDDDDDD LMAO

I seriously crack up every time Yoochun uses his pregnancy as an excuse/defense. He's so adorable. <3

Changmin owns and Junsu's slow. Love it!

And I seriously started dying of laughter when I read Yoochun's last line... Stupid Kanye... -_- Hehe, am I your new bff now? :D eventhoughsomeonealreadybeatmetoit

Thanks for writing this, I really love it! <3
I'm sad that the next chapter's the last, though... T_T
Yoochun will have the baby, Junsu will propose (hopefully?) but unfortunately there will be no more Yoosu smexing. I can't wait to see how you write in-labor-Chun. I fully expect a scene of hilarity and pain, LOL. Although I feel pretty bad for Chunnie... I just can't see Jaejoong ever forgiving him for ruining his big day! XDDD

Ily! <3

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suju_shinki November 4 2009, 01:04:07 UTC
Yunho is a scary man. believe that XD

Chun's pregnancy defense had proven him very usefull XD

YOU ARE SO TOTALLY MY BFF NOW. I DON'T CARE, I'LL HAVE 23 BFF'S IF I HAVE TO.

Oh, it was my pleasure writing this, really. It was so much fun..and I'm sad it's going to end soon to T___T

omg you're presuring me with your high expectations XD I hope I can fulfill them, I'll do my best to make the last chapter the best! Fighting!

and If I said before that Yunho is scary...Jaejoong...*shivers* /lol

Thanks for commenting bb ILUVYOUTO<333

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laurana1 November 4 2009, 01:47:38 UTC
Haha yes, Yunho is very formidable! Luckily he's usually very mellow, but when it comes to his Jae... be afraid. Be very afraid. XD

It's true! What will Chun do when he has the baby? He'll no longer have that excuse! (Do people in the world of male pregnancy also nurse their babies? Yoochun: "Don't hit me, I'm nursing!!!")

Yay for multiple BFF's! :D The more the better, right?

Oh I'm sorry, please don't worry, I don't mean to pressure you! I'm sure it'll be FANTASMICAL no matter what. Why? Because you're amazing, that's why! ^_^ So far I've loved everything, I'm sure the last chappie will be no different! <3

*Cries at the thought of scary Jaejoong*
I hope they can also use formula to nurse their babies in mpreg world, because I fear for Yoochun's life after the baby is born... I don't want the baby to starve, too! XDDD

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layla_zala November 4 2009, 01:30:46 UTC
hahahahaha...
so chunnie chnged his mind??
hmmm..sounds normal 2 me!!!
hehehehehe
n he's going 2 labor..
how disastrous is that..
during yunjae wedding~~

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suju_shinki November 4 2009, 17:33:17 UTC
Chunnie brings the drama XD
and Su should just understand the Chun.

luvyou<333

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reeses6826 November 4 2009, 01:39:05 UTC
Haha as soon as I read the Kanye reference I mentally pictured Jaejoong as Taylor Swift XD

So funny!! Yay, he's in labor!!!!

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suju_shinki November 4 2009, 17:38:20 UTC
lol at taylor!Jae XDDD
I'm happy you commented! Thank you~~~
<3

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