There's still something about this dynamic that I love, and I keep hoping that I'll get more and more into their lives, yet at the end of each chapter I've had some question answered only to add another three or four to the list.
The dynamic between Lilly and Veronica is still just as powerful as I would imagine it to be had they stayed friends, just as I'm interested in this tension that you've built between Logan and Veronica here.
I finally got a chance to catch up with this, and it's great! I love well-done AUs and the different relationships the four of them might have had in another time. I'm glad Veronica and Logan hooked up, as an eternal shipper, and I'm interested in Duncan's reaction to it. It's also interesting that Veronica has both Duncan and Logan's attention, while Lilly seems possibly a little lonely.
It keeps getting better and better. I'm quite curious about what happened to Lilly though. She changed her whole appearance, that smells like heartbreak to me. Great job!
I'm sorry I missed this when you first started posting, but it's really interesting and original. I'm completely fascinated with grown-up Lilly, and intrigued by Veronica having slept w/ Logan and Duncan in the same summer. Maybe I'm reading too much into things, but it seems to me Lilly's a bit to interested in Veronica lately ... is there something else going on in Lil's head? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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The dynamic between Lilly and Veronica is still just as powerful as I would imagine it to be had they stayed friends, just as I'm interested in this tension that you've built between Logan and Veronica here.
I can't wait for more of this.
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Great work, I look forward to more!
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