SH 2015: Breathe, We’ll Be Okay (for skyroll)

[suholiday]

For: skyroll
From: ANONYMOUS until May 22, 2015

Title: Breathe, We’ll Be Okay
Rating: R
Pairing(s)/Focus: Suho-centric, Suho/Chanyeol, brief!Suho/Kris, brief!Suho/Yunho
Length: 11,122 words
Summary: In a mission to prove to the world that he can be imperfect and messed up, Junmyeon actually messes everything up.
Warning/s: language, sexual situations,

Comments

[skyroll]

SPOT

[suholiday]

The fic for you has been updated and moved to Dreamwidth. :) If you saved the fic on Pocket, please use THIS, instead.

[misszhangyixing]

Oh my god. This is a fic I never knew I needed till I read it. Oh wow.

This seems so...real. All of Junmyeon's struggles, his down fall. I can't help but pause for a few seconds before I continue reading because I feel like crying & I need to calm myself down. The characterization is brilliant, especially Junmyeon.

I really felt all of Junmyeon's emotions, and I feel bad for him, with all those things he went through.

Can't explain how absolutely amazing this is. What a beautiful read ♥

[exzhile]

this is melancholically beautiful!!!!!!!

it was a lovely read---and the emotions were there and i really don't know what to say more aside from loving everything bout this :)

amazing.great.lovely.beautiful.

[endlesstars]

Thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ♥

[endlesstars]

omg thank you so much!! That is the nicest comment ♥ I'm sorry it was a bit of an emotional roller coaster but I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you again for the kind words!

[endlesstars]

hahaha hi there :D Surprise? I love fics with A Struggle so angst somehow always works its way in. Though this was more serious than I'm used to writing so I stressed over it for weeks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it though and the comment about dialogues makes me feel warm and fuzzy. Thank you so much for the nice comment!!

See you at the next exchange? haha ♥

[nachtegael]

I wanted to read this during the exchange but didnt get a chance! This is such a great au....its nice to see Junmyeon as something more than the typecast good kid, and your portrayal really taps into the deep feelings and insecurities behind that.

The flashback part where you started it with everyone knew except Junmyeon, and then ended it with the same thing, how he didnt even realize his feelings for Chanyeol himself !!! T__T wow that was poignant, especially when we get to the note on the script at the end!

all the lil details too....at the dog place and the retirement home....gah theyre so cute and so dumb before they figure things out! ( also this is very random and I realize Yeongja is a common name for old ladies, but I have a bazillion head canons about PCY's elderly aunt named that so that line about "Yeongjas been cheating for years" made me so happy, haha xD )

anyway, great work and awesome story, two thumbs up for you dear author!

[cairistiona]

i have warm and fuzzy feelings and a happy smile on my face ♥ thank you!