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Fic: History Repeating - Atlantis

Oct 30, 2007 15:30

Title: History Repeating
Author: sugargroupie
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,063
Summary: these are the moments they possess equallyNotes: So, occasionally I write porn for the sake of porn. Or, I used to, and I'm trying to get back into the swing of things. I don't know what season this is set in, maybe S2, but there are no specific spoilers. This is ( Read more... )

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sugargroupie November 6 2007, 18:20:52 UTC

Thanks very much, I appreciate it. :) I adore Teyla so much, I can't decide who's my favorite between her, Elizabeth and Ronon.

oparu November 2 2007, 05:19:21 UTC

amazing smut.

fabulous characterization.

amazing smut.

Elizabeth and Teyla getting drunk.

amazing smut.

Wow. I love the darkness and the beauty of the character study and you you leave it unfinished.

sugargroupie November 6 2007, 18:25:15 UTC

Haha, thank you for the multiple compliments about the smut, especially. I'm always interested in whether or not my sex scenes work for the reader.

Elizabeth's an enigma in a lot of ways, at least for me, so it was fun exploring her through this story.

hannah554 November 2 2007, 21:03:40 UTC

*fans self*

I really loved this fic, seeing inside Elizabeth's head was great and the scene with Teyla was good too, a shame they never really explored their freindship on the show. Good Job!

sugargroupie November 6 2007, 18:40:15 UTC

Well, thank you for reading and commenting! As for the elements of Elizabeth and Teyla friendship, I figure I can either complain about the lack of it on the show, or I can write about how I'd like to see it.

anr November 4 2007, 01:51:29 UTC

That was great! A really enjoyable read. :)

sugargroupie November 6 2007, 18:43:58 UTC

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing it.

ed_84 August 3 2008, 23:02:35 UTC

Um, damn. This has to be six different types of awesome. I love the language and flow, and how they're both fight the emotional tug of being together, claiming just hot sex. It's a great story told with perfect narration.

Also, loved the Teyla moments.

And hot, too! Did I mention that before? Because it is!

sugargroupie August 4 2008, 00:08:58 UTC

Hee, thanks! I love this pairing, but I don't write them as often as I'd like because I can never be sure about the voices and point of view. I'm glad this works for you.

Teyla, I just adore. There should be more carefree moments between her and Elizabeth, in fic at least.