A True Gentleman

[suede_scripture]

Title: A True Gentleman (11/?)
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Rating: PG-NC17
Warnings: AU, angst, art geekery
Summary: Uni fic.

Comments

[acaranna]

*Squeeeee* I'm soooo happy! I'm glad that you finished a new chapter! I was waiting and am now bouncing off the walls.^^

[suede_scripture]

Thank you!

[eff_reality]

Dom raised his eyes and his chin, glaring back at his friend with enough fire to deliver a warning not to rip into it one way or the other. Elijah’s eyes widened, his mouth pursing around words and questions that didn’t escape. Dom brazenly lifted his camera and snapped a shot of that look, so rare to see in this last year.
Beautiful!

He shifted his feet and his hips in those jeans and apron cocked with the unconscious move. Dom licked his lips and held his breath.
Billy. Hips. Jeans. Meow.

Breakthroughs are happening! I love them! :D And even through all his doubt and girly pining, Dom is still a saucy little minx at the end. ♥

More!

[suede_scripture]

Weee! Thanks!

[msilverstar]

Oh ATG!Dom, you are growing up. Elijah too.

Great writing, the dialog really works and the layers of feeling underneath.

[suede_scripture]

Thank you!

[glass_moment]

Eee, this is so lovely! I must admit I am finding this fic a lot easier to read now that Dom is being less of an asshole. The exchange between he and Elijah was lovely, but what really stood out about this chapter was the art- all the descriptions of the photos and Dom's process in taking them. You do an excellent job of nailing the right amount of description so that the reader can visualize the photos perfectly, without going overboard and making it a whole paragraph to skim. Just perfect.

[suede_scripture]

Thank you! :D

[babydazzle]

[suede_scripture]

Thank you so much!