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suede_scripture

A True Gentleman

Nov 18, 2010 12:11

Title: A True Gentleman (4/?)
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Rating: PG-NC17
Warnings: AU, angst, art geekery
Summary: Uni fic.

( Chapter 4 )

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Comments 15

qaffan2004 November 19 2010, 00:29:09 UTC

Oh my gawd I love it!!!!

suede_scripture December 1 2010, 00:42:24 UTC

Thank you!

msilverstar November 19 2010, 01:25:46 UTC

I was just thinking about this series and hoping there'd be more soon. This chapter is a bit difficult emotionally to read, especially when Dom's taking over the class, and then the rubbing it in :-( But I like that, something more than love at first sight.

suede_scripture December 1 2010, 00:42:38 UTC

Thank you!

eff_reality November 19 2010, 04:39:47 UTC

It was sort of a happy accident, really.
Hee!

I really liked this chapter. It was biting and detailed, with fantastic dialogue. ♥

suede_scripture December 1 2010, 00:42:54 UTC

Thanks, BB!

ckdutchess November 19 2010, 05:29:28 UTC

Man this is killing me! I love the dynamic they have with each other and I can't wait to see where it goes.

suede_scripture December 1 2010, 00:43:05 UTC

Thank you!

not_a_lamb November 20 2010, 08:26:44 UTC

WOW. Well that fuckin rocked. I was cheering Billy on all the way through that argument. I don't understand why Dom's such a fucktard. Why is it that some people have everything and still get their rocks off tormenting people who have so little? I know there are mitigating circumstances, that that's kind of the point of this chapter. Still, I have very little sympathy for Dom in this fic. I'll be interested to see how you take him from being a jerkus to being someone that the reader is rooting for.

Whew. You got me all worked up! Great chapter, hon. I look forward to chapter five!

suede_scripture December 1 2010, 00:43:33 UTC

Thank you!